Gone Fishin' - MJJB Comments


Dria&&Michael4Ever14th February 2011 09:13 PM
One question: WHERE IS TREE (ksimm81) WITH HER DEPENDS DIAPERS????

JESUS, MARY, AND JOSEPHHHHHHH!!! :heat: Nicki, that was unquestionably HOT. SCATHING, 3rd DEGREE, LAKE OF FIRE HOT!. GAHHHH Michael in his Give in to Me get up has ALWAYS been a panty flooder for me! In all that black with his curls and that gold chain around his neck :creepy::drool::crazylol::ohmy::slem:

And YANA!!! Damn, who's bad-YOU ARE!!! You go ahead, you sexy Dutch Goddess. (Hehe, Dutchess :laughehe:) Guess Mike really brought out the freak in you :highspeed: Lil Rob made that song thinking about you LOL (Of course not implying that you've been freaky deaky with him too :heha: I only know about your humpity with Mr. Anaconda Jackson.)

These were my fav parts:

Quote:
He never takes his eyes off of me even when he pats her hair and replies “I love you more.”
:heha: DAMN MIKE. Way to be a butthole! He diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiid that! :toofunny:

Quote:
He looks down at me paying lip service (pun intended) to his best friend, his lips curled into a snarl, his eyes all glazed over with desire.
The "beautiful/ugly" face....Nicki, you threw the granddaddy of all human male sex face's into this...-bows down- When I read that, I literally gasped out loud just IMAGINING that wickedly delicious face of his...mmmmmmm :heat:

Quote:
Breaking away from her juicy lips I make my move wanting to live a little dangerously tonight. I take her ear lobe into my mouth and suck on it before asking breathlessly ”Will you completely give in to me tonight girl?”

“Yessssssssssss” she hisses in reply.

“Come with me then.” I waste no time in pulling her to her feet and leading her to the bedroom.
Call me a weirdo, but when Yana said that, I imagined her flickering out a forked tongue LOL I bet if she did, Michael probably would have found that even sexier! And "Come with me then"....BAHAHAHHAHAHAHA! Michael should have his own psychic hotline cause SHE SURE DID :slem:

And last but not least:
Michael "duck pout" Jackson.
WIN


SUPER JOB NICKI!! CAN'T WAIT FOR CHAPTER 2 :crazylol:

mjfan♥forever14th February 2011 09:25 PM
HOLY F.UCK

That was...that was just....Nicki....oh my sweet Nicki that was...friggin HOT!!! Yana, you are one lucky woman!!!! Mr. Jackson sure brought the "freak" in you didn't he?? :slem: Gosh that was hot :heat: And Michael in his Give Into Me outfit is just...f.uck my life, Michael. Please :cute:

When is it my turn, Nicki!!!!!!????

:heha:

Loved this chapter :slem:

So much!!!

I can't wait for chapter 2!!!!!!!!

:yeahbaby:

Yana14th February 2011 09:37 PM


I......I......I-I-I have no words :eek:. I'm absolutely .......speechless.
This is seriously the first time that I have no f*cking idea how to respond :heha:.
It's gonna take a while before I come back to planet Earth :rescue:.
Jesus Christmas :heat:.

Okay, alright...... take a deep breath and try to form some coherent sentences, woman.

For a second there I was afraid I was going to be tossed around between Michael and Slash like some cheap two dollar hoe :eek3:.
Thankfully that did not happen :ph34r:. I mean I love Slash but no.... just no.
*shakes her head to get rid of the images*
Jesus , that was hotter than I ever imagined it myself :drool:.
I was clenching my thighs together while reading it (actually I still am or is that tmi? :heha:). The licking, the sucking, the blindfold...oi :heat:.
It was perfection Nicki. Thank you sooo much :arms:.

Now if you ladies please excuse me, I need to uhm.. I need to go somewhere :scared:.

ps does this
Quote:
Time for round 2…
mean there is going to be another fishingtrip? :applehead:

Off.the.wall14th February 2011 09:39 PM
Oh. My. Sweet. Jesus.

That was f*cking amazing! That was just...like...so...dayum!!!! Yana you lucky little girl you! Jesus I'm sweating right now. That's how excited this just made me. That was just absolutely outstandingly hott! Gahh give in to me Michael is such a baaaaaaad boy! Mmmm I would do bad things to him. Not like you were any more innocent Yana! You're just as much a naughty girl :slem:

Oh my god amazing first chapter! Simply amazing. Even better because Slash was in it. It was cool that Kara got some action too, slash isn't as hott as Michael but I'd say he's a damn good catch! Ugh slash is hott. Amazing job! I can't wait for chapter two!:crazylol:

Dirty Dani14th February 2011 09:40 PM
OMG!!! http://i948.photobucket.com/albums/a...azy_kermit.gif
Awesome!!!! I lack proper words!!! :thud:

Carley14th February 2011 10:22 PM
OMG Sweet lord!!! that was just hot Loved it Nicki, just :heat: can't wait for the next one :)

Librian14th February 2011 11:03 PM
That was good! That was really good!!

I'm glad Slash dissapared in to the night and left you alone, Yana :lol:
I like how the boyfriend just slipped into the dark unknown. Naughty girl :slem:

MJThrillMe14th February 2011 11:18 PM
Yana, although we've never met, I officially hate you. :ph34r: I'm so freaking jealous right now. I can actually picture Michael doing all that when ... you know ... :slem: Tell us, please, have you seen him again after the making of "Give In To Me"? :tlaugh:
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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 853682)

I’d rather bend you over and f.cuk you senseless ...

F.UCK ME!!!!!!!! That was ... :thud: No words ...

Nicki ... what can I say? It was :heat: and I was :drool: ... Oh Lord! The song ... the s.e.x. ... :rescue: Great job, I totally loved every minute of it. :mmm:

I hate myself so god damn much for not learning about "The Fan Diaries" sooner. :angrywall: :angrywall: :angrywall: :pullhair: :pullhair: :pullhair: :girl_tantrum: :girl_tantrum: :girl_tantrum: I truly hope you, girls, will do this again one day. :dummy: :dummy: :dummy:

Can't wait for chapter 2. :timer:

apsongbird14th February 2011 11:33 PM
Damn YANA You lucky girl....

HAHAHA Fish I like that... But OMG OMG OMG OMG.... THAT WAS SOOOOOOO HOT...
In smiley's :drool::heat::crazylol::thud:

Yana14th February 2011 11:55 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Librian (Post 853777)
I'm glad Slash dissapared in to the night and left you alone, Yana :lol:
You and me both, girl :ph34r:.

Quote:
Originally Posted by MJThrillMe (Post 853790)
Tell us, please, have you seen him again after the making of "Give In To Me"? :tlaugh:
:heha:
No, that was the whole idea I had actually. It was supposed to be a one time event.
I'm his 3D :slem:.

michelle115th February 2011 12:20 AM
O....M.....G, that was SEXY AS HELL!!! :heat::heat: I-I-I'm speechless. Yana, you lucky girl!! :happy: I can't wait for the next part!!

vicky15th February 2011 01:33 AM
Nicki baby I mean this was just :blowup: seriously girrrrllll the things you did to me with this....I mean....I just....died!!!! Yana you lucky girl and you have a boyfriend but mehhhh who am I kidding I would sooooo do the same boyfriend?? :brow: what boyfriend???

The way he laid it on you geeeezuz all I can say YANA I AM JEALOUS!!!!!

Nicki baby amazing and the descriptions from the start to the end gahhhhhhhh you hae me going gaga over here and whats this round two???

loved it loved it loved it I will be back to give you my all time favourite parts of the chapter love ya baby:wub:

Oh btw I LOOOOVE how yu write slash OMG he is sooooo effing sexy

Lenore15th February 2011 01:38 AM
Oh Nicki! Oh... ooh Nicki!! OH NICKI!! :thud: DAMN IT WOMAN!! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME!! This was sooooooooooooooooo... so so soooooooooooooooooooo FRICKIN HOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!! :heat:

Oh Yana! You're such a lucky girl!! :thud:

And Nicki, you're SO talented! :thud::thud:

kajexa0315th February 2011 06:10 AM
NIIIIICCCCCCKKKKIIIIII!!!!!!!!! Me on your leg:

:crazylol: *hump* :drool: *hump* :crazylol: *hump* :drool: *hump* :crazylol: *hump* :drool: *hump*

:crazylol: *hump* :drool: *hump* :crazylol: *hump* :drool: *hump* :crazylol: *hump* :drool: *hump*

:crazylol: *hump* :drool: *hump* :crazylol: *hump* :drool: *hump* :crazylol: *hump* :drool: *hump*


My Queen! OMG!!!!! Niiiicccckkkkiiiii!!!!! :worthy: I'm an incoherent, babbling FOOL right now! This does not in any way, shape, or form constitute as a proper comment, but baby ...

It's all I got right now!

OMG!!!!! (Is there a limit to how many times you can say that in ONE chapter?)

Oh Nicki- marry me! :hehe:

When my mind cools down from 'steam roast', I will leave you my thoughts.

Superb job, baby! :kiss: You showed ya a$$ (errr) - buttocks! :laughehe:



Carley15th February 2011 07:57 AM
Get toutured with MJ Pic's on FB Is making think How will I cope with what I read in here let alone MJ pic's :drools:

middy15th February 2011 08:41 AM
Nicki girl that was well hotttt:yes:
Mike knealt over her while she gave him some good head:heat:
Oh my:O
Brilliant!!
How was it for you yana:wink2ni3:

ஐGirℓ Is Dangerousஐ15th February 2011 02:29 PM
Holy mother of god...Nicki, that chapter was beyond HOT! I don't know what else to say, I'm speechless. :blush:

suzmary15th February 2011 03:59 PM
But gir, that's HOT. Seriously, Yana, you lucky girl, you. Blindfold, mirror, hotel movie watching, that covers three of my long list of "things I want to do wiht Mikey" that I've always had.

HOTHOTHOTHOTHOT!

OurFarewellx315th February 2011 05:21 PM
That was amazing! Yana's a lucky gal indeed.

sexyeyes15th February 2011 08:50 PM


:crazylol:Thanks for the L.O.V.E. Ladies :wub2: y'all make a gal SO happy :grin:

I would love to reply to all of your comments individually but I'm a little overwhelmed at the response :blush2: But it's such a relief to know that you all enjoyed reading Yana's Diary, I had SO much fun writing it I just hope I made you proud Yana.

OMG Ladies you are in for such a treat with what we have in store for you. Thank you for sharing your wonderful fantasies with us because none of this would be possible without them!

So thanks again for showing us the L.O.V.E.

W.E. L.O.V.E. Y.O.U. M.O.R.E.

Yana15th February 2011 09:33 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 854378)
I just hope I made you proud Yana.
Oh, I you did :girl_sigh:. I have to tell you that I was sooo nervous when I saw the chapter was my chapter.
It was like it was really happening :dummy:. Butterflies all over the place :heha:.
Really Nicki, I seriously still have no idea how to respond properly to it :ph34r:.


Since I have no idea how to thank you for my diary.
I just let Michael do it with this:
http://i52.tinypic.com/jsh5zr.gif
and this:
http://i56.tinypic.com/1ymj28.gif
and this:
http://i51.tinypic.com/332v4sw.gif
Oops, how did this get in here? :innocent:

apsongbird15th February 2011 10:10 PM
Well so Far so Wooza!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I loved it all.
I just can't wait untill the next one hahaha... Best thing ever.

This is for the girls who have written these chappters...
:worshipping::worshipping::worshipping:

JHazelEyes08068915th February 2011 11:37 PM
Aunt Nicki, I don't know whether to kiss you or bow down before you, so I'm doing both: :worthy: :kiss2:

That was amazing :crazylol:! It was so good that when I finish reading, I need a :slash: and I don't even smoke :eek:.

Yana, I'm with everyone else: you are one very lucky Dutchess (Dutch Goddess :hoplol:...love that one, Dria!). You got it on with Dangerous Mike. Not just Dangerous Mike tho, but all-black-wearing-looking-sexy-as-f*ck-making-your-panties-drop-and-your-punani-scream-GITM Mike :thud:.

The whole chapter was :heat:. I thought my computer screen was gonna melt for a good min while I reading :ph34r:.

Again, bravo Auntie. You started us off right with Yana's Diary. Now the rest of us are waiting for our turn with the King Of Pop :slem:.

or as I like to call him (and I got this from one of Dria's stories :laughehe:):

:worshipping:The King Of Poppin' Cherries:worshipping:

Love ya :huggle:,

Mary:excited:
MJJ_Forever16th February 2011 02:21 AM

:eek::heat:

Oh my lucky stars...yana, yana, yana you lucky little minx you :wink2: Getting all that gud luvin like that. OMG I can only imagine what the hell I'd do if I saw Mikey givin me the eye durin filming and then just up and havin someone tell me he wants to see me. I'd piss in my pants, run in the bathroom change into a spare pair, then run back out ready for action :hoplol: Dude if I was Kara I'd be pissed :heha: I'd be all "Oh un-uh, no this trick didn't just come with me here on MY tickets and then just up and have Michael all over her ass!" :ohnoyoudidnt: LOL but ey, baby got Slash so it wasn't too bad (not Michael :fine: but cool) Yana knew good and well what he was tryna do the moment he shook her hand smh girl tryna play dumb lol AWWWW poor boyfriend!:aw: Poor baby will never be able to make his girl come again nor will he ever look the same in her eys. Shame but Mike knows once they get a taste of the FORCE aint no way we'd be able to go back to sixth and seventh best with average men!

LOVED the blindfold! That was so hot. How many times have i closed my eyes and opened them hoping to find a naked MJ there waiting for me when I open em again? Too many times to count...i won't even go into my jealousy at the mo :dry: Come with me girl HELL YEA MIKE ANYTIME ANYWHERE. Him and that tongue ladies...beware. I'm officially tossing a warning sign on that thing: Respect the tongue ladies. Respect it. :respect:

Lol Niki you've done a good thing gurl. A real good thing for us poor gals who live vicariously through the eyes of those women out there that MJ undoubtedly screwed on the DL. Great job babe, can't wait to read more! :yeahbaby:

So is this going to be one story a day??? :drool: Eeeep! Vicky, do me good baby, can't wait. With the stressful week i'm having, a little TLC from the gloved one himself seems like exactly what i need :slem:

Good luck, Dani. Vicky's gonna handle that for ya. Back to read and comment on the next part soon :bleh:
suzmary17th February 2011 03:16 PM
Yeah, me, too! Nicki said it like it is! But Nicki, your girl Yana is still recovering, so don't you go forgetting that you got some skills, girl, some sexilicious writing skills. I can't wait for mine! Ha!

kajexa0324th February 2011 05:39 AM
Nicki, Nicki, Nicki!!! I know it's been a loooonnnnngggg time, but now that a sistah's got a mind all free and clear .... girllll- I've gotta come for you! Baby- what a way to:





:heat: ... you had it so 'CRUNK' up in here on Valentine's Day!!!!!! Seriously baby ... you set the bar waaaaayyyy high! You and me have been together for a good, long while now and I know you've heard me say this before - but on the forreal????

THIS PIECE WAS A PERSONAL BEST!!!!!!!!

- ... not including what you showed us for you-know-who :zipit: which I personally think is going to completely kill me deader than dead... MO' deader than you ever kilt me... even MOST DEADEST than you done kilt me right here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :thud:

But... I digress! Mike was a total DUDE in this piece and Yana had her *crack* handed to her on a platter! :rescue: Yana baby:




...but it was allll gooodddddd!!!!!


Let's get down to bizness - this bid'ness of 'FISHIN'!!!


Quote:
Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 853682)


Unfortunately for Slash his batting average is not as high as mine but he never gives up, the man has the stamina of a horse and the libido of 15 year old boy and tonight is no different.

First of all, regarding this ^^?? I know this is the Michael Joesph Jackson Board and this piece is about Michael Jackson and his girl YAH-NAH :slem:, but Slash.... I believe EVERY WORD of what you wrote right here!!! He is hung like a mule and nasty to boot. I can't count the number of times I've been horny watchin' him HUMP-AROUND with his guitar and Slash + Mike = :dead1: so ... :uhm: ... there...

Next!


Nicki- I l-o-v-e-d how you wrote our boy all confident!!! LOVED IT!!! :wub2: And when I read it, how I wished he knew (all the time) how very sexy he was! After watching that YouTube of him with the 'perpetual boner' during his performances, I knew you were right on the money with this analysis:

I feel so good tonight, I feel horny as f.uck.

The music never fails to turn me on...

The sexy ass bass line ... is partially responsible for my body ... grinding wildly to the sound of my own singing.

I know I look good! ... I’m confident I look good.

Did I mention how turned on I get when I perform?

^^^ One word: H.A.W.T. (period) :laughehe:



Girllll... my mind was in the d.amn gutter from the top to the bottom of this thang 'cause this line (below):

I want to feel more energy from the crowd, I want them to give me their all like I’m giving to them.

:thud: The images in my mind were all of MJ doing 'pelvic thrusts' all hitched up to some chick's pelvis!!!! (Sorry Yana :sad:, but as this point in time- the chick is ME! :lol3:) ... heyyy... Who says you can't insert yourself into somebody else's fantasy?? :dontknow: :grin:



Now giiiirrrrlllllll... ain't NUTHIN' better than s.e.x. with a storyline!!! Yana and Kara??? :toofunny: Poor Kara... I would've probably been about ready to beat my friend's a$$ (yes Nicki ... that means you and Vicky) if she got something that I wanted on my free pass!!!! Hmpfttt... Cause he might've wanted to screw who he wanted to screw, but I d.amn sho' would've copped a free feel, rubbed some coochie on him, some titties in his face, brushed past him and grabbed a handful ... SOMETHIN'!!! SOMETHIN'!!!!! 

I watch him slowly rise to his feet and walk towards us but before he can shake our hands Kara bounds into his arms and practically squeezes him to death in a bear hug.


See! ^^ Perfect opportunity!!! :heha: Oh.. and then I would've gone out with Slash's fine ass for good measure cuz I'ma a hoe! :heha:


... Michael-duck-pout-Jackson 

:toofunny: :toofunny: :toofunny:



I shake my head trying to rid myself of that uneasy thought and that’s when HE catches me off guard. His smell permeates my senses when he steps into my personal space and before I can react he’s grabbed a hold of my hand and gives me the most sensuous handshake of my life. His thumb brushes the back of my palm and I quite literally stop breathing.

Nicki. Seriously... Right here ^^^??? Let the fainting begin. :thud: 


”Yana what a cute name, is that short for something?” 

Off topic agreement: Mmm... Yana is IS :yes: a cute :cute: name! :wub2:


*clears throat and gets back on track* Uhhh... yeah- so, like I said ... Kara kind of got the short end of the stick (but not really cuz my man Slash? :slem:) and MJ is clearly feigning for Yana. "I'll make sure she gets home safe"? Ha! Who's going to keep her safe from his predatory ways? :brow: He's smellin' her ... checking her tits out- among 'other' things: 

I zone out imagining what it will feel like to have her long lean legs thrown over my shoulders as I f.uck her passionately...

I’d rather bend you over and f.cuk you senseless but I don’t think that’s the answer you’re looking for is it sweetie? 

Hmm I wonder if she tastes as good as she smells? 

:ohmy: Effin' perv! But in the words of Missy Elliott: 'Daayyyuuummm ... that's hot"!!!! :heat: But Nicki girl... this wasn't the only heat this little piece of perfection was emitting! He knew he wanted her from get-go. He 'sent' for her! And now he's sitting in close proximity to her 'frontin' his way through a movie and it's just... *whew* I could feel his tension building (literally) :laugh:! The hand holding, thigh touching, hand rubbing, and finally the kiss? OMG!!!! Excellently descriptive girl... You really know how to build to the ...


literal CLIMAX!!! :rescue:


At this point, 'oh help me lawd' cause I'm struggling to contain my excitement until they 'really get crunk and I didn't have to wait for long:

I let my wandering hands seek out the one place I’ve been dying to touch and squeeze all night – her titties.

I don't know about anybody else, but there's something about MJ lurstin' after some TITTIES that makes me :drool:!!!!! With the exception of stretching her mouth wide enough for him to analyze her stomach contents, Yana had been 'pretty' mild up to this point. Shoot! Better than me cause panties would've drop SOON as Slash and Kara left the room! Bump a movie! Pfffttt... With MJ's irresistible sex appeal and charm, I knew babygirl wouldn't be able to resist him long:

“Michael if we’re going to do this then I don’t need you to be gentle and caring, it is what it is right? A f.uck, nothing more nothing less.”

^^^ Yana just extended to him an O.P.E.N. invitation to party!!! :wink: And this freaky, sexy, plotting, planning, nasty mind, corrupt thoughts having Michael was ALLLL for it!!! :crazylol: Comments like these:


”Will you completely give in to me tonight girl?” 

“Come with me then.” :mmm:

Got me quivering and quaking... And giiirrrrlllll- you KNOW how much I love a bossy a$$ Mike!!! :slem: Brotha is USED to being in charge! He's USED to calling the shots so why would he be any different in the bedroom? :brow:

“Take off your shirt” 

“Bend over” 

:thud: And the alternating POV's??? Her rubbing his throbbing and veiny thing, him tongue-f.ucking the pu-nani, and him straddling her face... OMG!!! The mirror!!!!! The blindfold!!!! Biting?!?!?!!!! Pulling and scratching on her hips and thighs, rolling her over on all fours and taking her by surprise! 'Tiltin' dat a$$$$$'?????!!!!!! Ohhhhh my sweeet loooorrrrrddddtttt Nicki!!!! Me after reading all thath.o.t.s.a. (below):




And this right herrrreeeeeee ... which has got to be the SCORTCHIN' HOTTEST LINES YOU HAVE EVER WRITTEN IN YOUR SEXY EYED LIFE!!!!!


“CUM…” 

*pant*

“WITH…” 

*pant*

“MEEEEEEE…..” 

*pant*


“Cum with me baby…. Cum with me…” 


Ooo Nicki... I'm soooo beside myself with horniness right now that mere words are insufficient to describe how I feel. You got my heart skipping a beat!!! My pulse is racing!!! I know my blood pressure has risen too high!!!! My (*&%#@^#$ is twitching uncontrollably!!! You make a hetero girl wanna try thangs! I- I wanna ... - :uhm: ... can I? Can I ... ask you a question?


Wonder if you'll let me lick yourrrrr ...


SPOILER: 
face? :bleh:



What? :dontknow: What you chicks think I was gonna say??? :brow: I'm talking bout...





*Shaking my d.amn head* Just ... nasssstttttaaaayyyyy!!!! :rolleyes: :heha:


Nicki!!! This piece was T-totally terrific!!! F.uckTASTIC!!!! And the notion that you'd leave us with Mike picking Yana's little a$$ up cave-man style and taking her to the shower to see if 'the fishy can swim' got me feelin' kinda ... *squirm*!!! Great job, girl! I'm so *chest*stuck*out* proud of you baby! :bighug:

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