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JamieLynneJackson
1st December 2010 03:06 AM

DEAR LORD............



This one realllyyyyyyy had me going. Whoaaa just completely wow. I need like a reallyyyy cold shower right now before i just go nuts!

He is so demanding! DEMANDING Michael makes me just want to-------ARRRGHHHHHH!!!!!


I have to contain myself now, I'm usually a good girl. A really good innocent girl. But ****. I wish I was in Lisa Marie's place right then and there. he could turn my and toss me any way he wanted to! I would have his babies, give him the key to my house, my car, my credit card, good lord, ANYTHING to take part in that ROYAL COBRA royalness. If that's a word!

Vicky, Vicky, Vicky.....what can I say? You really know how to please your audience. My husband officially NOW thinks i'm nuts. My dog is even looking at me weird. If they were reading or imagining the DIRTY things that were in my mind they would be sweating, and hyperventalating too. i'm supposed to be a GOOD GIRL DAMMIT. I would be or DO ANYTHING if i had a chance with that man.

Lisa Marie how in the world did you ever leave this man? I mean HOWWWWW???? You had been missing out on the past years! LOCKWOOD REALLY????What has he got on MichaelJACKSON? Anyway back to the story--whooooooooo. I need to visit my doctor tomorroww!!!!

Such naughty writers but I DONT MIND!

KEEP IT UPPP!!!

Can't wait for the next one!


Remember the Time wil be HOTTT i can see that it will ;))))


Yana
1st December 2010 07:06 AM

Damn, I don't have the time to read it properly right now:eek:.
I just skimmed through it a bit and that was enough to make me all :dizzy: and :heat:.
I'll be back :scared:.

Carley
1st December 2010 08:18 AM

OHHHHHHH MY!!!!! :thud: just SO HOT!!!!! Great gre4at JUST Great story Girls!!!! xx Can't wait for the next chapter

michelle1
1st December 2010 04:52 PM

Holy smoke, this chapter is so WOW!!! :happy: Keep going.

OurFarewellx3
1st December 2010 06:22 PM

Damn... That chapter was, damn.... It nearly killed me lol.

ksimm81
1st December 2010 06:44 PM

I swear, I often wonder how you guys will be able to top yourselves with every 'Diary' entry you put in-- yet you do it! The chapters just get better and better. :yes:

Michael MANHANDLED Lisa in this!! He channeled that anger into mind-blowing sex that had Elvis's daughter literally climbing walls and swinging from chandeliers!!!

I must say I really enjoyed the part featuring Debbie Rowe. I truly believe that Michael cared deeply for her and trusted her which is why she was given the honor of carrying his babies :wub:

She was loyal to him (and she is til this day) and sometimes I wish they would have worked out as a couple... :aw:

BUT BACK TO THE SEX!!!!! :mjmagicstick: I was so VERY turned on when Mike and LMP were arguing and their looks of disgust and aggravation towards one another quickly turned to looks of LUST!! :crazylol: AUUUGHHHH I am jealous of that woman til this day!! She got to taste the seasoned MEAT :eat1: and I will forever loathe her for that!! :fine:

When he started smacking her with the ding-a-ling I just couldn't stop laughing!! Mike is a mess!!!

I LOVE AGGRESSIVE MIKEY!! I can't emphasize that enough!!

Once again, GREAT ENTRY!!

Vicky, Kathy and Nicki-- :dance: you girls ROCK!! :dance:

I love this thread so much!! THANK YOU!!!:happy:



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MJJSmash28
1st December 2010 07:27 PM

:crazylol: :heat: :drool: :thud:

What are you ladies tryin to do to me? Kill me? lol well it's working. That killed me. That was... that was... I am speechless. Each chapter gets better and better. I need to prepare myself for the next installment. lmao!

Great job :lol:

apsongbird
1st December 2010 11:40 PM

AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH..... Going crazy now after that. OMG:chained::drool::heat::crazylol:
Keep them cuming I mean comeing

kajexa03
2nd December 2010 03:29 AM

*tsk, tsk*... :dry:

girlz, Girlz, GIRLZ!!!!! :brow:

I can't leave you two alone for one moment! :nono: I turn my back and yall cuttin' the capital "F" up!!!!

I'm at an utter and complete loss for words!

Angry, punishing sex makes me... :blush: :heat: :drool: :crazylol: :excitebaby:!!!!!

Give me just a 'wee' bit more time to form a logical and coherent response and then...

I'm comin' for YOU!!!! :ph34r: Yeah ladies... let me catch up with my life's drama and it's COMMENT TIME!!!!

Wonderful, superb, terrific, awesome, mind-numbing, earth shattering writing!

Smokin', fiery, flaming, sizzling, hot SEX!!!! :slem:

You made your Big Sistah proud!!! :grin:

duckfeet
2nd December 2010 03:51 AM

Oh to be punished that way by Michael. I would gladly become a brood mare for him. And then die happily.

Lisa didn't deserve his magnificent cock.


This gets better and better.

MJLOVER23
2nd December 2010 05:34 AM

I love those stories, but everytime u describe Michael sitting in his bed watching the videos this pic comes to mind.http://i970.photobucket.com/albums/a...72786/5mjv.jpg

vicky
2nd December 2010 05:50 AM

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Originally Posted by MJLOVER23 (Post 809515)
I love those stories, but everytime u describe Michael sitting in his bed watching the videos this pic comes to mind.http://i970.photobucket.com/albums/a...72786/5mjv.jpg

Giiiirl I just passed out whooooooo hoooooo please coment more often using pics yowza!!!!

Yana
2nd December 2010 07:59 AM

I.......I..............I........ :thud:.............


:dead1:

duckfeet
2nd December 2010 03:45 PM

Iman is so stunningly beautiful I can't wait for RTT. I may need to borrow those Depends.



vicky
2nd December 2010 03:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by duckfeet (Post 809723)
Iman is so stunningly beautiful I can't wait for RTT. I may need to borrow those Depends.

Borrow?? hell take the whole pack you're going to need them loll

Kat we need more depends!!!!!!!!!!

ksimm81
2nd December 2010 05:46 PM

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Originally Posted by vicky (Post 809725)


Borrow?? hell take the whole pack you're going to need them loll

Kat we need more depends!!!!!!!!!!

Here ya go!! NOW WITH LEAK GUARD FOR YOUR MIKEGASM INDUCING NEEDS:




Ngbballgyrl15
3rd December 2010 03:12 AM

AHEM all I gotta say is Lisa is one lucky a** b!tch. Mike continues to put his thang down though I must say that he had me hurtin' in some parts made me sore just thinking about what he was doing to that girl lol Loved it as usual. Might have to take some pills cuz my blood pressure prolly sky high but other than that everything is good money lol

MJLOVER23
3rd December 2010 03:50 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by vicky (Post 809522)


Giiiirl I just passed out whooooooo hoooooo please coment more often using pics yowza!!!!

I just finished chapter 4 and had to take a quick cold shower.

P.S. If you (Vicky) want more pics, you got them!!!!

Stay*Awhile*MJ58
3rd December 2010 07:14 AM

LOVE THIS!!!!! AWESOME JOB!!! CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!! SO HOT!!!!!!!!!!

kajexa03
4th December 2010 03:06 AM

Ladies: :dry:

I'm sorry to be later than usual with my comment, but it's.all.your.fault. for being so d*amned yummilicious with this post!!!!! I was cross-eyed for a few days, my hands were shaking, and I started to stutter! I had 'just about' gotten myself back to normal and guess what?????

:ohdear: I had to read the WHOLE D*MN THING over again just to leave a decent comment! :rolleyes:

Since I'm still handicapped and can't express with words how very annoyed I was by all of this, I've located some little smilies to tell you how I 'REALLY' feel:



:smiliess:


:woop: OMG!!!! Were yall trying to KILL an old lady??? :heat:

loved :wub: the 'Evil Little Princess' reference taken from Karen Faye's email. Nice touch~ :yes:

Likewise, I enjoyed Lisa Marie's reference to "Nursey". :laughehe:

Let me also point out that I love the h.o.t.s.a.!!! That's what we're here in HDMW for; however... sex with a storyline is just... a-frickin'-mazing! You girls wrote the pure he!! out of this piece. Not only do we get to enjoy this angry, rough, and punishing sex. We also understand the reason why so Michael and his 'PUNISHER' do not come off as cruel, but more disappointed and hurt. Having said, on to my commentary! :hoplol:


HOW I enjoyed the vividly descriptive account of the 'hand job'. The visual mushroom made my 'H' (horny) key stick(y) from all of the drool :drool: I dripped onto it! FISTINA had her close-up and d*amn it was Oscar-worthy!


The exchange between Michael and Debbie was sweet :friends:, but sad:sad: : 

Quote:

Originally Posted by vicky (Post 808806)

“you need to be a father Michael and if that dream never comes to fruition with Lisa-Marie, well, hun you know I’ll gladly give you what you need...” 

He shouldn't have been placed into the position of having 'this' conversation with a friend rather than with his wife. I enjoyed this account very much because I believe it to be an accurate, true-to-life depiction of Michael's relationship/circumstances with Debbie. Thoroughly enjoyed it~ :happy:

BUT - there seems to be a face-off of sorts. I have to admit that I was 'kinda' feeling where LMP was coming from walking up on her husband jaw-jacking with a chick who has offered to give him a baby. I connect with her hostility in this situation and can certainly understand why she bust all up in there with her hair standing on end!

Then, on the other hand, there's this (below): 


How she could even stand there with jealousy seeping from every pore when she could have been f*cking her ex-husband for two whole weeks :shocked: whilst frolicking in the sea for all he knows. 

(below)??? A freakin' Fourth of July MESS!!!!! *smh*

For two week she’s fantasized about this moment and she nearly came close to f*cking Danny in Hawaii, she was that horny.

^^^ Did I miss something here or did Lisa forget her globe-trotting adventure to Hawaii with her 'baby daddy'??? I can see why her new husband would be less than amused. BOTH have a right to be 'swoll' round about now, but her attitude is pissing me off! So much so that I could fast forward and tell her: "b!tch this ain't Bruce-Ashton-and Demi, but I took a :chillpill: pill because of this (below):

Their eyes lock as there breathing gets heavier with desire as lust begins to take over their senses. 

“Call me a b*stard again and see what happens” 

Their 'anger' is fueling their 'appetite'!!! :eat1:

“you’re a f*cking b*astard!”

“and you’re a f*cking b!tch!” 

And somebody is fixing to 'get' f*ucked!!! :yes:



Some of my favorite YANA quotes:

Quote:

Originally Posted by vicky (Post 808806)


...for a split second I hear a familiar voice that has me cringing a little.

...If I wasn’t so horny I’d turn the damn tape off...

...to say the honeymoon period is over - is such an understatement...

“...now I’m gonna show you why you left Danny for me.”

...at this very moment this is what it is, plain and simple, nasty sex.

...‘she’s nasty as f*ck in the bedroom but a bit of nudity has her bugging hard’ ...

He had an erection as big as the empire State building...



Receiving oral sex in a standing position??? :heat: But I was "really" digging on THIS:

Michael gets to his feet turns Lisa around one again and bends her over doggy style.

Not giving her even a second to think about what’s coming next, Michael immediately rams his engorged cock into her dripping wet pussy causing Lisa to yell out from his forcefulness.

The thought of Michael's engorged ANYTHING being rammed ANYWHERE???? *____________________* :dead1: 


“Is it okay for me to come in?” Wayne asks causing Michael to snap his head back in time to see the door slowly being pulled open.

Wayne? Aw... HEEEYYYAILLLL naw he didn't 'bust' in on them! Knockin and opening the door?? *tsk,tsk* :nono:

will admit; however, that the 'interruption' was funny to me cuz I know it p*issed Miss Priss off!!! :laughehe:


:uhm:.... now for some really 'sexy' banter: 


Quote:

Originally Posted by vicky (Post 808806)

“You want this?” 

...“you gon’ gimme a baby?” 

...“liar” he spits, “I found your birth control pills, you sneaky b!tch!” 

 Is *thrust* this *thrust* what *thrust* you *thrust* want"? *thrust*

“YOU (slam) LIED (slam) TO (slam) ME (slam) LISA (SLAM)”

“Girl wait till I get you back in the trailer I’ll show you what hurt is all about” 

“Is this what you want Lisa?”



Ahhhh.... so no'trickery' with the cameras this time, huh???

...she coyly walked to the camera...

...she smirked as she approached the tripod and set it up.

She clicked the camera in position focused the picture and pressed record....

Michael walked over to the tripod snatched the camera and started filming Lisa

^^ A willing victim! :slem: Nice~



The piece here?? She's baiting him and playing a game that she most certainly will l.o.s.e. :yes:


“...you need to choose will it be me or will it be Debbie?”

“What’s it going to be Michael? Debbie or meeeee?”

“Convince me Lisa to pick you. Suck me dry”... 

Oooo, lawdy Mike!!!! :rescue: I need oxygen... She must have been dreaming 'bout the ding-a-ling during the entire filming process because she's eager as a son-of-a-gun when he starts b!tch slapping her with the joystick!!! - licking her lips, masturbating, flicking out her tongue - that's why he grabbed that head and force-fed her azz!!!! Too hot!!!!

...a few more thrusts and a few more moans his cum shot through filling her mouth at a faster speed than she could swallow.

...he smirked as he kept pumping in and out of her mouth not giving her time to swallow or catch her breath. *___________* :dead1:

“Suck your fingers baby”...

“Harder Lisa, suck your fingers harder like you’re sucking my cock”...

“Take my cock and put it in your pussy Lisa”...

^^Ha! Told ya she wouldn't win her little 'game'... WHO is in the driver's seat 'now', Lisa??? :fine:


“Lisa I want you to have my babies” 

“Answer my question Lisa, are you going to have my babies?”

:mmm:... now he's going a.p.e.s.h.i.t. in the p.ussy!!! She's liking it... She probably gave him the wrong answer to piss him off on purpose!!! :grin:

“ANSWER ME” he grunted

Pressure on the clit??? Ummmm, he plays dir-tay!!!

“YES...OR...NO?” he asked her again

“NOOOOOO”

she screamed as he pushed another finger in her pussy stretching it to its limits

The pleasure intensifies, but dang... that sounds painful... What'a'freak! :rolleyes:

He slapped her ass hard leaving his imprint, SMACK....a second slap....SMACK a third slap ....He removed his hand and without warning he plunged his ready to explode cock in her ass hole.


:eek3: :thud: Ooo-wee, d.amn... I'm sh!t outta words.... :zipit:



She was going to call his bluff there is no way he would leave her not with the way he f*cked her, her pussy was too good to be walked out on.

One more comment - 'cuz this ^^ -ish here makes a girl wanna start :cussing:... :ohnoyoudidnt:... but never-f*cking-mind... *steps away from the thread mumbling*


*back now... cussing inwardly*

:hmm: ... so he ponders who will provide the visual stimulation for his next act of 'self-gratification'??? I would comment on that, but something else caught my eye:


Hurriedly I pop in the video and settle back down, lube in one hand cock in the other.

And the visual of that brings this to mind:


Quote:

Originally Posted by MJLOVER23 (Post 809515)

:worthy: Giiiirrrrrrlllllll.... ^^^ I don't know you yet, but it's a plumb pickled pleasure to make your acquaintance! :wink:



My sistahs, Nicki and Vicky... Each "Diaries" installment gets increasingly better!!! I marvel at your creativity!!!! Yall did the d.amn thing!!!!!

:worshipping:

suzmary
4th December 2010 04:09 AM

Ok, you dirty, nasty girls! :yes: YOU ROCK!~:dance:

If there could be a theme song for this YANA chapter, it would be Crazy ***** by Buck Cherry! I'm no Lisa fan, and I was hoping he'd ram something bigger than him, or IN ADDITION TO HIM, up her ass to make her feel some serious pain! For telling him no, and for having nerve to get jealous of a hug from the Debster while she cavorted in Hawaaii with the ex.

But, yeah, Crazy ***** works for me! Now, on to Iman, you sexy, Michael Porn Divaz! :slem:

vicky
4th December 2010 04:44 AM

I just want to say THANK YOU these coments make our day and make us eager to keep topping the last chapter I will on behalf of Nicki and myself reply to each and everyone of you wonderfully, delicious, excitable ladies...your comments spur us on especially the pictures:dummy:

Daffodil-Dreams
4th December 2010 05:37 AM

Nice update. I liked it. Keep up the good work, girls. :)

-OFFtheWall-
4th December 2010 10:48 PM

3)In The Closet"Nympho's Milk with Calcium that builds strong Boners"
I mean damn Aunt Nicki, I must be a mute because I've been rendered SPEECHLESS again! You did the DAMN THANG! I'm getting this all out now because by the end of this I'm just DONE! The most I can use is smilies to give you my reaction to this!

Michael in the ITC video is just :heat: with his fyne ass...

Naomi, knew what the hell she wanted didn't she?! Gon girl!

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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 804998)

“Can I have some milk Daddy?” Prince says as I accidently spit my juice into his face.

I quickly slap a palm over my mouth, trying my best to get my reaction under control before my poor boy is completely drenched in apple juice.

“Hey Daddy,” Prince pipes up “got milk?” he screeches.

You know what?! :toofunny: LMAO!!!

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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 804998)

“So you wanna suck my c*ck?” I blurt out and watch her bee stung lips drop open, apparently in shock at my question. I'm merely responding to her titillating question that she whispered into my ear during filming earlier today, but the shocked look on her face is priceless.

My face went straight: :shocked: ...but hell Naomi the Nmph asked for it...lucky broad...

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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 804998)

“You want this,” I breathe into her ear. I can’t help but grin when I hear a small throaty groan escape her mouth as I slowly grind myself into her.

:rescue::rescue:

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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 804998)

“Michael…” she says awakening me from my little daydream.

“Shhhhh” I tell her bringing my index finger up to her lips, “the only talking you’ll be doing for the next hour or so is when you tell me how good my c*ck feels inside your pu$$y.”

:shocked::shocked::thud::thud: :worthy::worthy: *inhale, exhale*


Quote:

Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 804998)

When she comes face-to-face with my hard c*ck, I hitch my wife beater up over my ribs and chest, over my head, throwing it to the floor before I order her to“suck me.”

:thud: :rescue: :worthy: The Nyphm gladly obliged! Swallowed her spinach and thought...

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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 804998)

“Mmmmmm” I hear her say as she wipes both corners of her mouth with her index finger and thumb before I hear her say “my turn?”

With an amused expression I taunt “your turn what?” watching her reaction with a grin as I place the force inside my jeans that I’ve stepped back into.

Once again, I see the spoilt little brat expression appear on her pretty face and I laugh out loud as I say “girl you got what you wanted, you said you wanted to suck my c*ck, so I let you!”

“Are you f*cking serious?” She says in her thick British accent, “you’re going to leave me like this? After I swallowed your sh!t too?”

I laugh at her ridiculous statement. Who’s she fooling tyna' pretend she didn’t enjoy swallowing my goods? 

“Girl, I’m hungry,” I say in earnest “I need some food.”

I watch her face perk up at my revelation.

“Girl I need some real food,” I say emphasizing the word “real.” Poor girl thinks I’m hungry for her pu$$y! Well I am… but not yet.

ROOOOOOOOOOOTFLMAO :toofunny: O My Gosh! :toofunny: Michael too G for that. Damn Naomi, don't worry though you might not can get the face, but you get that 'good good' in between his legs..

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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 804998)

Either she’s really dumb and clumsy, or she’s really smart and clever. I vouch for the latter as the milk appears to miss her mouth, splash onto her breasts, runs over her stomach before it drips onto the floor, pooling beneath her bare feet.

At first I think maybe this was an accident, but when she tips the carton upwards and away from her mouth, well I quickly realize exactly what her intentions are.

Before long the entire contents of the carton spills onto her naked body and she’s drenched with milk.

“Ooops,” I hear her chuckle as she throws the empty carton to the floor.

The Nymph advertising her Milk tryna give Mike a sip, AND HE GRABS SOME FREAKIN COOKIES....

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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 804998)

Taking one of the cookies, I slowly pass it over her stomach and dip it into the milk that’s pooled inside her bellybutton.

When the cookie is nice and soggy I bring it to my lips and take a bite.

“Yum,” I say as I hold the half eaten cookie to her lips so she can taste what I'm tasting.

“You like that?” I tease. Who am I kidding, of course she likes it, this girl is down for anything!

:shocked::shocked: :thud: :rescue:...That should be Me....that b*tch TOO LUCKY :dry:


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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 804998)

“Stop teasing me Michael,” she spits out through gritted teeth in frustration.

I look dead on into the camera that’s secretly recording out little tryst and grin with excitement.

“You want it girl?” I ask teasingly.

MICHAEL IS SOMETHING ELSE :thud: :thud: and this part right here...

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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 804998)

“How ‘bout you sing to me first girl?” I tease as I swirl my index finger around the entrance to her cavern.

“S-s-sing?” she pants breathlessly.

“Yeah sing for it girl,” I taunt.

“How ‘bout I start you off?” I growl into her ear before taking the juicy lobe into my mouth for a quick suck and nibble.

“Mmmmmmmmm,” she moans loudly at my tongue teasing her flesh.

“I’ll take that as a yes then,” I say before I start to sing “one thing in life you must understand….” I continue to tease her soaking slit but I keep my fingers from doing what she most desires.

“Go on,” I coax her.

“T-t-the truth o-of lust woman t-to m-m-man,” she stammers in between moans.

“Good girl,” I growl and as I reward I slowly begin to insert my middle finger into her honey pot.

“Ooooooo,” she cries as she tries her best to push my hand deeper into her pu$$y giving her the fullness that she craves the most.

“Uh-uh you haven’t finished singing to me yet,” I taunt.

She hisses at me and this only makes me want to tease her more.

I know I won’t be able to keep this up for much longer as my c*ck is leaking all over her ass with my pre-cum in excitement, but to have this much power over this little minx… well it feels so good. 

“Go on,” I order her.

“So o-open the door a-and you will seeeee,” she moans as she bucks her ass into my groin.

“Yessssssss,” I say as I cajole her with my fingers.

“There are noooo secrets,” she pants “m-make youre mooooove… aarggggg… set me freeeee…..”

Before she’s finished saying the word “free” I’ve plunged two fingers into her wet pu$$y and she automatically cries out with relief.

:eek3::eek3::worshipping: :heat:

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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 804998)

I spank her hard… once… smack… twice… smack…. three times smack… I manage to insert a second finger into her as and with that, she explodes. 

I feel her squeeze the sh!t out of my d!ck, her juices creating a slurping sound each time I thrust back into her.

“Oooooo keep doing that girl,” I groan as I feel her continue to clench and unclench her inner muscles, giving me the tight space that my c*ck so desperately craves.

“Yessssssssssssssssssssss, urgggggggg, fuuuuuuuuckkkkkkk,” she screams, bucking her ass into me harder whilst she thrashes the top half of her body wildly against the counter top.

By now I feel my legs start to shake as my ball sac grows tighter by the second. I plunge into her pu$$y at a fervent pace, pounding harder and harder with each thrust.

The sweat drips from my forehead and trickles down my face spilling onto her back. Over and over I feel her walls spasm and contract; I’m pretty sure from the way she’s gripping at my c*ck and from all the yelling she’s doing - that I’m giving her multiples.

But it’s what she does next that really tips me over the edge, where I’m falling helplessly into the blissful state that is nirvana.

She reaches back and grabs a hold of my ball sac and pulls down on it hard. I grip her hips so hard that I’m positive I’m going to leave bruises on her unblemished skin once we’re through.

The pressure on my jewels is too much and on the next thrust, I feel my c*ck empty into her heat whilst my eyes practically do a 360 degree roll inside my head.

:blowup::blowup::blowup: <---Like a KY Intense Commercial :thud: :ripsad:

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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 804998)

Sh!t who was Part IV again?

Oh yeah… that’s right… my ex-wife.

:dry: I gotta read about that SQUARE next, but I know I'ma love it LOL

MJLOVER23
4th December 2010 10:55 PM

I love each chapter of this story and to show my appreciation I am gonna bless you with the pictures that come to mind when I read each chapter.

(When Michael is masturbating to the videos)

(In The Closet)

(You Are Not Alone)

I am still looking for pictures to match Thriller and The Way You Make Me Feel, but don’t worry I will find them even if I have to make them myself. Can’t wait for the next update!!!!!!!!!

-OFFtheWall-
5th December 2010 02:15 AM

4)Y.A.N.A
---Throw her the D*ck & then Throw her the BOOT

Lisa you a lucky B*TCH! You wasn't worthy of the d*ck but whateva :dry: Aunty Nicky & Vicky did that DAMN thang even with your square ass, now that is TALENT! And I finally caught UP! YES!! :excitebaby:

Now!

You know I had to take my personal feelings out of this towards LMP before I started to read, but all of it came back like a damn boomerange after this line...

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Originally Posted by vicky (Post 808806)
‘I can’t believe she’s still taking birth control’ he fumes to himself silently. The overwhelming feeling of disappointment resurfaces as he thinks back to the packet of pills he found a few days ago.

Ha! You can't believe it Mike, I sure can! That don't even make any damn sense, but yes it does. Her heart wasn't it in any way, but skip her! Debbie held you down in the long run...

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Originally Posted by vicky (Post 808806)
After a few minutes Debbie pulls away and stares deeply into his black doe-eyes before saying “Mikey if you ever need to talk…” he nods his head in understanding preventing her from finishing what she was about to say. She’s always been such a good listener over the years and deep down he knows that she has feelings for him, but he could never reciprocate what she feels. He’ll admit freely that he does love her but the fact of the matter is, he’s not in love with her and more importantly, he’s not in lust with her either. Being a red blooded male… well this is a major factor of why he can’t be with Debbie the way he knows she wants him to be.

Even though isn't feeling her like that, it is still a :wub: moment....

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Originally Posted by vicky (Post 808806)
They embrace once more but this time a little longer as they silently let each other know that no matter what, they’ll always be there for one another. Lost in the silence of their embrace, they fail to hear the trailer door open and they both jump apart startled when they hear a cough interrupting their innocent hug.

“L-Lisa,” Michael stammers in shock at her just standing there. She knew that “nursey” as she likes to call her, had some weird crush on her husband but this just takes the p!ss! she fumes.

AND here her ass come with an interuption, must be in her blood :laughehe: Debbie should mocked her cough woooo that would've been some entertainment lmao...But here Lisa go with her lil' fit..:rolleyes:

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Originally Posted by vicky (Post 808806)
“What the f*ck Michael,” she spits “why was she here?” unable to hide her distaste for his friendship with Debbie she shakes her head with annoyance.

*jumps in out of thin air* Why yo ass there Lisa?! 

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Originally Posted by vicky (Post 808806)
 She has a name Lisa, her name is Debbie and Debbie is a good friend to me .” Unable to hide his frustration he slips into yelling mode, something that usually he hates to do but Lisa knows exactly how to push his buttons.

“Well what did your friend want? Why today of all days was she here?” Unable to stem her bitterness and resentment towards her husband’s relationship withnursey , Lisa angrily throws her bag at Michael’s head trying her best to get him as riled up as she is.

“Aw hell naw Lisa,” Michael shouts as he ducks from the oncoming assault. Within seconds he is upon her and is roughly pushing her to the wall as she tries to wrestle free from his clutches.

“Get off of me you b*stard,” she retorts as he pins her hands above her head trying to tame the wild animal from doing any damage to his body.

Uh-Oh :unsure:

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Originally Posted by vicky (Post 808806)
“Call me a b*stard again and see what happens,” Michael says whispering into her ear as he presses his semi-hard cock into her stomach.

Lisa knows full well what will happen if she tries to call his bluff and that is exactly what she wants as she breathlessly says “you’re a f*cking b*astard!” 

Within a second of the words escaping her mouth, Michael pulls Lisa roughly off the wall, turns her around before slamming her roughly into the wall once again.

She know what she doin :dry:...

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Originally Posted by vicky (Post 808806)
Gripping the back of her hair, Michael pulls her head back so that her neck is exposed before hissing into her ear “and you’re a f*cking b!tch!”

*spits out drink* :toofunny:

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Originally Posted by vicky (Post 808806)
[I] “F*ck me,” [I] she sighs into his mouth.

“What for?” he asks with disdain dripping from his words “you gon’ gimme a baby?” he says taking her off guard as he looks adamantly into her green eyes.

She nods her head yes and this has him scowling at her even more “liar” he spits, “I found your birth control pills, you sneaky b!tch!”

:shocked: Damn Lisa, he callin you out your sh!t right after teasin the hell out of you, and he STILL not done...

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Originally Posted by vicky (Post 808806)

“M-Michael… I-I…” 

“Save it,” he scorns “you can lie all you want later, but now… now I’m gonna show you why you left Danny for me .”

:eek3::eek3: BEST F*CKIN LINE EVER!!! :thud:

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Originally Posted by vicky (Post 808806)
 Is *thrust* this *thrust* what *thrust* you *thrust* want? *thrust* Michael pants each time driving his d!ck into her harder.

OMGosh! Hold on for a sec....:thud: :thud: :thud: :rescue:[I]

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Originally Posted by vicky (Post 808806)
“What’s it going to be Michael? Debbie or meeeee?” she asked cocking an eyebrow looking up at him as her hand gripped his cock tighter.

“Convince me Lisa to pick you. Suck me dry” he gritted through a clenched jaw her hand was still pumping his cock faster.

:heat::heat::heat::shocked::shocked:...b*tch better convince him!!

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Originally Posted by vicky (Post 808806)
“Is this what you want Lisa?” he asked her slapping his cock across her lips

“Michael stop playing games” she breathed out as he continued slapping her face with his cock. She reached down and started rubbing her clit, his throbbing cock being slapped across her face gently aroused her, making her slit wet. She moaned as she knelt there taking all his cock had to give her.

“You’re a dirty girl Lisa, any other woman wouldn’t take it but you’re nasty Lisa” he smirked at her obvious arousal

He should've slapped her ass hard with the d*ck and gave her a concussion...she LIE too much :dry: 

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Originally Posted by vicky (Post 808806)
“Yeah baby swallow daddys cum, its tastes sooooo good” he smirked as he kept pumping in and out of her mouth not giving her time to swallow or catch her breath.

DAMN MIKE! :laughehe: don't kill her ass! lmao

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Originally Posted by vicky (Post 808806)
He walked to the wall and slammed her hard against the surface. She gasped at the force leaving her breathless; he continued attacking her neck with his mouth. Sucking, licking, grazing his teeth down her neck and then up again.

“Take my cock and put it in your pussy Lisa” he breathed against her neck

:heat::heat::heat:I swear this b*tch LUCKY!! But then it just gets sad...

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Originally Posted by vicky (Post 808806)
“Lisa I want you to have my babies” he groaned as he picked up the pace her back rubbing the surface of the trailer wall, she ran her nails down his back scratching him.

Any woman in their RIGHT mind would've said "HELL YES, DON'T STOP" & meant it even through the angry sex! But this trick...

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Originally Posted by vicky (Post 808806)
“YES...OR...NO?” he asked her again

“NOOOOOO” she screamed as he pushed another finger in her pussy stretching it to its limits, she felt the burning of the stretch but the pleasure of it all overtook any pain he inflicted upon her. She wanted to scream yes but she wasn’t giving into him the stubbornness in her wouldn’t let her. She was going to call his bluff there is no way he would leave her not with the way he f*cked her, her pussy was too good to be walked out on.

F*ck being stubborn!! YESSSSSSS....Lisa you dumb!

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Originally Posted by vicky (Post 808806)
“YOU (slam) LIED (slam) TO (slam) ME (slam) LISA (SLAM)” he thrust his cock in and out as he grunted his words out to her; he sucked on her shoulder as his grip in her wrists tightened. She yelped with each and every thrust she felt his anger as he slammed her against the wall, sweat pouring out of every pore of his body, his body rubbing against hers leaving her breathless.

I know her ass was on hot FIYYAH! Welp..should've neva lied...And he still had some hope after the GOOD fu*k..

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Originally Posted by vicky (Post 808806)
“Yes or No Lisa?”

SMH...throw her ass the boot now

WOW!! That Angry Sex :heat: :heat: :heat: He put a hurtin' on her ass, and she ain't even deserve that sh!T! Lisa you TOO damn lucky for me...smh..I LOVED IT LADIES!! CAN'T WAIT UNTIL RTT!

kajexa03
7th December 2010 02:58 AM

Time for another episode of…. Drumroll please (da-da-da-di-dat-ta-da-daaaaaaaahhhhh)

:heha: Kathy’s Favorite Funnies (Volume IV: You Are Not Alone ) :heha:



Ladies! Ladies!!! What'cha doin' to us this go 'round???


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Originally Posted by JamieLynneJackson (Post 808833)
My husband officially NOW thinks i'm nuts. My dog is even looking at me weird.

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Originally Posted by ksimm81 (Post 809132)
She got to taste the seasoned MEAT :eat1:

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Originally Posted by ksimm81 (Post 809132)
When he started smacking her with the ding-a-ling I just couldn't stop laughing!!

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Originally Posted by duckfeet (Post 809469)
I would gladly become a brood mare for him. And then die happily.

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Originally Posted by apsongbird (Post 809321)
Keep them cuming I mean coming

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Originally Posted by Ngbballgyrl15 (Post 808728)
In the back of mind I always think about Michael f*cking the dog sh!t outta all his female leads

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Originally Posted by -OFFtheWall- (Post 810006)
:glaugh: the only thing that needed to be inserted was suzmary's pronounciation TWATIANA...

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Originally Posted by -OFFtheWall- (Post 810006)
Monsta got Mike addicted to her Jabberjaws!

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Originally Posted by -OFFtheWall- (Post 811119)
Aunty Nicky & Vicky did that DAMN thang even with your square ass, now that is TALENT!

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Originally Posted by -OFFtheWall- (Post 811119)
He should've slapped her ass hard with the d*ck and gave her a concussion...she LIE too much :dry:

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Originally Posted by -OFFtheWall- (Post 811119)
I know her ass was on hot FIYYAH! Welp..should've neva lied...

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Originally Posted by suzmary (Post 810619)
I'm no Lisa fan, and I was hoping he'd ram something bigger than him, or IN ADDITION TO HIM, up her ass to make her feel some serious pain!

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Originally Posted by Ngbballgyrl15 (Post 810095)
though I must say that he had me hurtin' in some parts made me sore just thinking about what he was doing to that girl lol

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Originally Posted by -OFFtheWall- (Post 809770)
SMFH...Brooke you shooool know how to spoil a NUT don't you?!!


:toofunny: :toofunny: :toofunny: :toofunny: :toofunny: :toofunny:
:toofunny: :toofunny: :toofunny: :toofunny: :toofunny: :toofunny:





But FIRST PRIZE for this installment is a TIE between 'my' babies (:baby_rolling: x's 2) :wub: :wub2:


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Originally Posted by ksimm81 (Post 809132)
This comment has been brought to you by:

Because you just never know.... :cloud:

:hoplol:


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Originally Posted by ksimm81 (Post 809768)
Here ya go!! NOW WITH LEAK GUARD FOR YOUR MIKEGASM INDUCING NEEDS:
Originally Posted by -OFFtheWall- (Post 809770)
1) "Thrilla" STICK!

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Originally Posted by -OFFtheWall- (Post 810006)
2) The Way "Monsta' Mouth" Made Him Feel

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Originally Posted by -OFFtheWall- (Post 811023)
3)In The Closet"Nympho's Milk with Calcium that builds strong Boners"

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Originally Posted by -OFFtheWall- (Post 811119)
4)Y.A.N.A
---Throw her the D*ck & then Throw her the BOOT


Girlz!!! Stop showin' ya assus in public or you gon' get a whuppin'!!!!!

:tlaugh: :tlaugh: :tlaugh: :tlaugh: :tlaugh: :tlaugh:

:tlaugh: :tlaugh: :tlaugh: :tlaugh: :tlaugh: :tlaugh:

:tlaugh: :tlaugh: :tlaugh: :tlaugh: :tlaugh: :tlaugh:




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Originally Posted by MJLOVER23 (Post 811029)
I love each chapter of this story and to show my appreciation I am gonna bless you with the pictures that come to mind when I read each chapter.

(When Michael is masturbating to the videos)

(In The Closet)

(You Are Not Alone)

:worthy: Girlfriend... YOU ^ get HONORABLE MENTION for bringing the hot.s(sexy).a(azz) to the thread!!!


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Originally Posted by Ngbballgyrl15 (Post 808728)
Kathy! Thank you girl for putting me on! 

Anytime my dear! :bighug: As you can see, we have some 'serious' comedienne's in this thread so I wanted you to meet your fam lady!!! Err-body, meet Nikki! She :crazy:, too!!! :laughehe: Nice to see ya, girl! :wink:



Thanks all! Your 'funnies' bring joy to our day!!!! Keep bringin' it!!! :wub:

-OFFtheWall-
7th December 2010 03:36 AM

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Originally Posted by kajexa03 (Post 812231)
Girlz!!! Stop showin' ya assus in public or you gon' get a whuppin'!!!!!


:laughehe: thats all Tree with her advertisements for Depends...lmao :toofunny:...I'm learning from the best lmaooo

vicky
7th December 2010 03:53 AM

Soooo my girlies just to let you all know that i will be responding to all ya sexay ass's and then once im done Sistah Kathy will be posting RTT....YESSSS SHE IS I have read it and lets just say prepare to be surprised :slem:

Ngbballgyrl15
7th December 2010 05:36 AM

Girl I accept my craziness lol You know me, I ain't got no room to be ashamed of any foolishness that comes out my mouth or in this case from my head to my fingers to the screen haha

vicky
7th December 2010 07:02 AM

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Originally Posted by kajexa03 (Post 809457)
*tsk, tsk*... :dry:

girlz, Girlz, GIRLZ!!!!! :brow:

I can't leave you two alone for one moment! :nono: I turn my back and yall cuttin' the capital "F" up!!!!

I'm at an utter and complete loss for words!

Angry, punishing sex makes me... :blush: :heat: :drool: :crazylol: :excitebaby:!!!!!

Give me just a 'wee' bit more time to form a logical and coherent response and then...

I'm comin' for YOU!!!! :ph34r: Yeah ladies... let me catch up with my life's drama and it's COMMENT TIME!!!!

Wonderful, superb, terrific, awesome, mind-numbing, earth shattering writing!

Smokin', fiery, flaming, sizzling, hot SEX!!!! :slem:

You made your Big Sistah proud!!! :grin:


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Originally Posted by kajexa03 (Post 810602)
Ladies: :dry:

I'm sorry to be later than usual with my comment, but it's.all.your.fault. for being so d*amned yummilicious with this post!!!!! I was cross-eyed for a few days, my hands were shaking, and I started to stutter! I had 'just about' gotten myself back to normal and guess what?????

:ohdear: I had to read the WHOLE D*MN THING over again just to leave a decent comment! :rolleyes:

Since I'm still handicapped and can't express with words how very annoyed I was by all of this, I've located some little smilies to tell you how I 'REALLY' feel:



:smiliess:


:woop: OMG!!!! Were yall trying to KILL an old lady??? :heat:

loved :wub: the 'Evil Little Princess' reference taken from Karen Faye's email. Nice touch~ :yes:

Likewise, I enjoyed Lisa Marie's reference to "Nursey". :laughehe:

Let me also point out that I love the h.o.t.s.a.!!! That's what we're here in HDMW for; however... sex with a storyline is just... a-frickin'-mazing! You girls wrote the pure he!! out of this piece. Not only do we get to enjoy this angry, rough, and punishing sex. We also understand the reason why so Michael and his 'PUNISHER' do not come off as cruel, but more disappointed and hurt. Having said, on to my commentary! :hoplol:


HOW I enjoyed the vividly descriptive account of the 'hand job'. The visual mushroom made my 'H' (horny) key stick(y) from all of the drool :drool: I dripped onto it! FISTINA had her close-up and d*amn it was Oscar-worthy!


The exchange between Michael and Debbie was sweet :friends:, but sad:sad: : 



Some of my favorite YANA quotes:


Receiving oral sex in a standing position??? :heat: But I was "really" digging on THIS:

Michael gets to his feet turns Lisa around one again and bends her over doggy style.

Not giving her even a second to think about what’s coming next, Michael immediately rams his engorged cock into her dripping wet pussy causing Lisa to yell out from his forcefulness.

The thought of Michael's engorged ANYTHING being rammed ANYWHERE???? *____________________* :dead1: 


“Is it okay for me to come in?” Wayne asks causing Michael to snap his head back in time to see the door slowly being pulled open.

Wayne? Aw... HEEEYYYAILLLL naw he didn't 'bust' in on them! Knockin and opening the door?? *tsk,tsk* :nono:

will admit; however, that the 'interruption' was funny to me cuz I know it p*issed Miss Priss off!!! :laughehe:


:uhm:.... now for some really 'sexy' banter: 



Ahhhh.... so no'trickery' with the cameras this time, huh???

...she coyly walked to the camera...

...she smirked as she approached the tripod and set it up.

She clicked the camera in position focused the picture and pressed record....

Michael walked over to the tripod snatched the camera and started filming Lisa

^^ A willing victim! :slem: Nice~



The piece here?? She's baiting him and playing a game that she most certainly will l.o.s.e. :yes:


“...you need to choose will it be me or will it be Debbie?”

“What’s it going to be Michael? Debbie or meeeee?”

“Convince me Lisa to pick you. Suck me dry”... 

Oooo, lawdy Mike!!!! :rescue: I need oxygen... She must have been dreaming 'bout the ding-a-ling during the entire filming process because she's eager as a son-of-a-gun when he starts b!tch slapping her with the joystick!!! - licking her lips, masturbating, flicking out her tongue - that's why he grabbed that head and force-fed her azz!!!! Too hot!!!!

...a few more thrusts and a few more moans his cum shot through filling her mouth at a faster speed than she could swallow.

...he smirked as he kept pumping in and out of her mouth not giving her time to swallow or catch her breath. *___________* :dead1:

“Suck your fingers baby”...

“Harder Lisa, suck your fingers harder like you’re sucking my cock”...

“Take my cock and put it in your pussy Lisa”...

^^Ha! Told ya she wouldn't win her little 'game'... WHO is in the driver's seat 'now', Lisa??? :fine:


“Lisa I want you to have my babies” 

“Answer my question Lisa, are you going to have my babies?”

:mmm:... now he's going a.p.e.s.h.i.t. in the p.ussy!!! She's liking it... She probably gave him the wrong answer to piss him off on purpose!!! :grin:

“ANSWER ME” he grunted

Pressure on the clit??? Ummmm, he plays dir-tay!!!

“YES...OR...NO?” he asked her again

“NOOOOOO”

she screamed as he pushed another finger in her pussy stretching it to its limits

The pleasure intensifies, but dang... that sounds painful... What'a'freak! :rolleyes:

He slapped her ass hard leaving his imprint, SMACK....a second slap....SMACK a third slap ....He removed his hand and without warning he plunged his ready to explode cock in her ass hole.


:eek3: :thud: Ooo-wee, d.amn... I'm sh!t outta words.... :zipit:



She was going to call his bluff there is no way he would leave her not with the way he f*cked her, her pussy was too good to be walked out on.

One more comment - 'cuz this ^^ -ish here makes a girl wanna start :cussing:... :ohnoyoudidnt:... but never-f*cking-mind... *steps away from the thread mumbling*


*back now... cussing inwardly*

:hmm: ... so he ponders who will provide the visual stimulation for his next act of 'self-gratification'??? I would comment on that, but something else caught my eye:


Hurriedly I pop in the video and settle back down, lube in one hand cock in the other.

And the visual of that brings this to mind:


My sistahs, Nicki and Vicky... Each "Diaries" installment gets increasingly better!!! I marvel at your creativity!!!! Yall did the d.amn thing!!!!!

:worshipping:

OHHHHH BOYYYY, Kathy your coments get better and better. Speechless hmmm thats a first loll I guess we did you proud Sistah :happy: We showed Lisa who wass the boss silly woman had the best thing and then she threw it all away what a total loser she is.....doesnt she know that MJs stick does the body good?? Babe this has been thye most awesomest experience thank you so much for sharing this with me I love you both:wub:


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Originally Posted by suzmary (Post 810619)
Ok, you dirty, nasty girls! :yes: YOU ROCK!~:dance:

If there could be a theme song for this YANA chapter, it would be Crazy ***** by Buck Cherry! I'm no Lisa fan, and I was hoping he'd ram something bigger than him, or IN ADDITION TO HIM, up her ass to make her feel some serious pain! For telling him no, and for having nerve to get jealous of a hug from the Debster while she cavorted in Hawaaii with the ex.

But, yeah, Crazy ***** works for me! Now, on to Iman, you sexy, Michael Porn Divaz! :slem:

Ohhh girl hows our biggest Sistah!!!!! Giurrrl she could have had a tousand d!ck shoved up her and she still wouldnt get it. Thanks for resding and comenting babe:wub: Glad you are loving it as much as us :dance:


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Originally Posted by Daffodil-Dreams (Post 810657)
Nice update. I liked it. Keep up the good work, girls. :)

Thanks babe we're happoy you liked it, thank you for reading and comenting and for showing your support its greatly appreciated :wub:


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Originally Posted by -OFFtheWall- (Post 811119)
4)Y.A.N.A
---Throw her the D*ck & then Throw her the BOOT

Lisa you a lucky B*TCH! You wasn't worthy of the d*ck but whateva :dry: Aunty Nicky & Vicky did that DAMN thang even with your square ass, now that is TALENT! And I finally caught UP! YES!! :excitebaby:

Now!

You know I had to take my personal feelings out of this towards LMP before I started to read, but all of it came back like a damn boomerange after this line...


Ha! You can't believe it Mike, I sure can! That don't even make any damn sense, but yes it does. Her heart wasn't it in any way, but skip her! Debbie held you down in the long run...


Even though isn't feeling her like that, it is still a :wub: moment....


AND here her ass come with an interuption, must be in her blood :laughehe: Debbie should mocked her cough woooo that would've been some entertainment lmao...But here Lisa go with her lil' fit..:rolleyes:


*jumps in out of thin air* Why yo ass there Lisa?! 


Uh-Oh :unsure:


She know what she doin :dry:...


*spits out drink* :toofunny:


:shocked: Damn Lisa, he callin you out your sh!t right after teasin the hell out of you, and he STILL not done...


:eek3::eek3: BEST F*CKIN LINE EVER!!! :thud:


OMGosh! Hold on for a sec....:thud: :thud: :thud: :rescue:[I]


:heat::heat::heat::shocked::shocked:...b*tch better convince him!!


He should've slapped her ass hard with the d*ck and gave her a concussion...she LIE too much :dry: 


DAMN MIKE! :laughehe: don't kill her ass! lmao


:heat::heat::heat:I swear this b*tch LUCKY!! But then it just gets sad...


Any woman in their RIGHT mind would've said "HELL YES, DON'T STOP" & meant it even through the angry sex! But this trick...


F*ck being stubborn!! YESSSSSSS....Lisa you dumb!


I know her ass was on hot FIYYAH! Welp..should've neva lied...And he still had some hope after the GOOD fu*k..


SMH...throw her ass the boot now

WOW!! That Angry Sex :heat: :heat: :heat: He put a hurtin' on her ass, and she ain't even deserve that sh!T! Lisa you TOO damn lucky for me...smh..I LOVED IT LADIES!! CAN'T WAIT UNTIL RTT!



WOW JAZZZZZIIII my beautiful niece YOU ARE AWESOME I see you take after your HOT MAMMA....your comments are as epic as ever and the fact that you have renamed all the shorts is just so amazingly brilliant loll I couldnt stop laughing girl you are awesome. Baby thanks for reading and comenting we love you babygirl:wub:

Carley
7th December 2010 07:16 AM

I am in need of another hot MJ'S Vid diary :)

vicky
7th December 2010 07:22 AM

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Originally Posted by JamieLynneJackson (Post 808833)
DEAR LORD............



This one realllyyyyyyy had me going. Whoaaa just completely wow. I need like a reallyyyy cold shower right now before i just go nuts!

He is so demanding! DEMANDING Michael makes me just want to-------ARRRGHHHHHH!!!!!


I have to contain myself now, I'm usually a good girl. A really good innocent girl. But ****. I wish I was in Lisa Marie's place right then and there. he could turn my and toss me any way he wanted to! I would have his babies, give him the key to my house, my car, my credit card, good lord, ANYTHING to take part in that ROYAL COBRA royalness. If that's a word!

Vicky, Vicky, Vicky.....what can I say? You really know how to please your audience. My husband officially NOW thinks i'm nuts. My dog is even looking at me weird. If they were reading or imagining the DIRTY things that were in my mind they would be sweating, and hyperventalating too. i'm supposed to be a GOOD GIRL DAMMIT. I would be or DO ANYTHING if i had a chance with that man.

Lisa Marie how in the world did you ever leave this man? I mean HOWWWWW???? You had been missing out on the past years! LOCKWOOD REALLY????What has he got on MichaelJACKSON? Anyway back to the story--whooooooooo. I need to visit my doctor tomorroww!!!!

Such naughty writers but I DONT MIND!

KEEP IT UPPP!!!

Can't wait for the next one!


Remember the Time wil be HOTTT i can see that it will ;))))

Jamie Boo Gurrrrrl you are awesome LOLLL your dog looked at you funny??? DAMN!!!! I've always thought that Lisa was a damn fool for letting that fyne ass go, she should have never given him an ultimatum she didnt realise that she wasnt sealing with Danny but with MJ oh well stupid girl. Babe thanks for reading and commenting :wub: Hope you enjoy the rest


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Originally Posted by Yana (Post 808900)
Damn, I don't have the time to read it properly right now:eek:.
I just skimmed through it a bit and that was enough to make me all :dizzy: and :heat:.
I'll be back :scared:.

YANNNNA baby girrrl you skimming to the good parts arent you??? LOL dont blame you babe. Thank you for reading and comenting and for your continuous support. love ya baby:wub:


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Originally Posted by Carley (Post 808916)
OHHHHHHH MY!!!!! :thud: just SO HOT!!!!! Great gre4at JUST Great story Girls!!!! xx Can't wait for the next chapter

Carley baby thanks baby for reading and commenting and we're thriklkled thst you think its HOOOOOT we so happen to agree with you loll love ya babe:wub:


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Originally Posted by michelle1 (Post 809075)
Holy smoke, this chapter is so WOW!!! :happy: Keep going.

Micdhelle thanks babe for reading and commenting and we wont stop babe 3 more to go babe lets all hope our hearts can manage:wub:


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Originally Posted by OurFarewellx3 (Post 809118)
Damn... That chapter was, damn.... It nearly killed me lol.

Babe thanks so much for reading and comenting it means the world for your continued support in out story thank you :wub:


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Originally Posted by ksimm81 (Post 809132)
I swear, I often wonder how you guys will be able to top yourselves with every 'Diary' entry you put in-- yet you do it! The chapters just get better and better. :yes:

Michael MANHANDLED Lisa in this!! He channeled that anger into mind-blowing sex that had Elvis's daughter literally climbing walls and swinging from chandeliers!!!

I must say I really enjoyed the part featuring Debbie Rowe. I truly believe that Michael cared deeply for her and trusted her which is why she was given the honor of carrying his babies :wub:

She was loyal to him (and she is til this day) and sometimes I wish they would have worked out as a couple... :aw:

BUT BACK TO THE SEX!!!!! :mjmagicstick: I was so VERY turned on when Mike and LMP were arguing and their looks of disgust and aggravation towards one another quickly turned to looks of LUST!! :crazylol: AUUUGHHHH I am jealous of that woman til this day!! She got to taste the seasoned MEAT :eat1: and I will forever loathe her for that!! :fine:

When he started smacking her with the ding-a-ling I just couldn't stop laughing!! Mike is a mess!!!

I LOVE AGGRESSIVE MIKEY!! I can't emphasize that enough!!

Once again, GREAT ENTRY!!

Vicky, Kathy and Nicki-- :dance: you girls ROCK!! :dance:

I love this thread so much!! THANK YOU!!!:happy:




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Kity Kat your continuous support humbles the best of us. Thank you so very much for all the wonderfully amasing words for the enthusiasm and for reading. I have to tell you the depends best line in the entire board for me, the fact that you have added the picture did it for me. I always read this with a smile thank you baby and we love you:wub:

OK GUYS IM GETTING THROUGH THE COMENTS so sorry I was nearly done then accidently refreshed the page so you can imagine the frustration anyhow here are part 2 of the replies i have a little more to do I havent missed any of you

EDIT: Kathy is almost done patience girls its a coming

Carley
7th December 2010 07:28 AM

Aussie Girl. Def think this is a hot story...Glad to be able to read it Love ya too hun xx

vicky
7th December 2010 07:42 AM

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Originally Posted by MJJSmash28 (Post 809161)
:crazylol: :heat: :drool: :thud:

What are you ladies tryin to do to me? Kill me? lol well it's working. That killed me. That was... that was... I am speechless. Each chapter gets better and better. I need to prepare myself for the next installment. lmao!

Great job :lol:

Ash baby us kill you on purpose??? NOOOO never lolll well maybe a little girrrl thanks for reading and for comenting you better prepare yourself, have you got an oxygen tank??? if not buy one love ya baby:wub:


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Originally Posted by apsongbird (Post 809321)
AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH..... Going crazy now after that. OMG:chained::drool::heat::crazylol:
Keep them cuming I mean comeing

Amy babe thanks so much for reading and comenting and we will keep you cuming and yes I mean cuming for more. loll the cum will be here lolll do you think i went too far with that??? loll love ya baby:wub:



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Originally Posted by duckfeet (Post 809469)
Oh to be punished that way by Michael. I would gladly become a brood mare for him. And then die happily.

Lisa didn't deserve his magnificent cock.


This gets better and better.

Misty babe wouldnt we all love to be punished by the cobra ahhhh and I agree with you Lisa just didnt deserve it, girrrl she thought she could tame it, tell me now can a snake be tamed??? HELL NO!!!! Thanks for reading and commenting babe love ya:wub:


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Originally Posted by MJLOVER23 (Post 809515)
I love those stories, but everytime u describe Michael sitting in his bed watching the videos this pic comes to mind.http://i970.photobucket.com/albums/a...72786/5mjv.jpg

Now I've already replied to this but I had to reply again FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCKKKKKK MEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Originally Posted by Yana (Post 809580)
I.......I..............I........ :thud:.............


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YANA we get you back and then this LOLL babyyyyyyyy come back to us we love you plus you dont want to miss RTT


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Originally Posted by Ngbballgyrl15 (Post 810095)
AHEM all I gotta say is Lisa is one lucky a** b!tch. Mike continues to put his thang down though I must say that he had me hurtin' in some parts made me sore just thinking about what he was doing to that girl lol Loved it as usual. Might have to take some pills cuz my blood pressure prolly sky high but other than that everything is good money lol

Nikki baby she is one lucky ass biatch she needed a hole transplant after that because MJ stretched it out to its limits loll Babe thank you for reading and commenting as for your blood pressure just send us the bill loll love ya baby:wub:


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Originally Posted by Stay*Awhile*MJ58 (Post 810188)
LOVE THIS!!!!! AWESOME JOB!!! CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!! SO HOT!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you babe we try to please and we're happy we're able to do it loll thanks for resding and commenting YAY!!! for commenting:wub: