This Is It - MJJBcomments


JamieLynneJackson20th March 2011 11:16 PM

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH LORD VICKY YOU GOT IT GOOOOD. He still wants to give you more too.......dear GOD mercy on meee.


*faints*

vicky21st March 2011 12:16 AM

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I BOW DOWN TO THE MOST SMUTILICIOUS QUEEN!!!!

Nicki, Nicki, Nicki that was just sooooooooo HAWWWWWWWWWT!!!! In all seriousness I am heaving and my heart is about to combust as for the nether regions I feel like I just got out of a swinning pool. You are SOOOOOOO AWESOME I am speechless BUT then again I'm not.

You have just gotten me f*cked in every hole, slmamed against a wall, a glass patio table, Bill walked in (which turned me on even more - yes I'm a freak) I was laid into by the King himself AND FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK ME did i LOVE IT!!!!

This is me afterwards and I dont smoke!!!!

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This chapter can only be described like this
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HELLLL YEAHHHHH BABY!!!!

Nicki My Darling My Baby You Did Me GOOOOOOOOOOD......I need to read again i cant get enough of this and i will give you a comment to end all comments you think my jerk ones are long this is going to put all those combined to shame, this comment is going to be long and detailed and fulled with gifs YOU deserve it baby becasue this literally made my day and the fact that its one of my Bday present thank you soooooo much babe you are soooo amazingly gifted you have taken my breath away ...

LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUUU MWAAAAAAAAAA
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apsongbird21st March 2011 12:22 AM

wow that was hot and steamy... Vicky you nasty girl <--- :wub:... I loved it...

Librian21st March 2011 12:25 AM

LOL I think Vicky liked it.

And so did I. It was very hot.

And I'm off to read mine again :lol:

michelle121st March 2011 05:48 AM

Holy sh!t, Nicki, that was HOT AS HELL!!! Vicky, you're one naughty and lucky girl! :wink: Loved it!

mjfan♥forever21st March 2011 06:04 AM

*spasms and falls out of bed*

Holy sh!t

I think...I think I just broke my arm....

That was so damn intense!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! I can't believe...Michael...did...that...OUTSIDE...with Vicky!!!!!!! :thud:

I have no words....

just....f*ck me sideways!!!!!!!!

This was soooo damn good, Nicki. And Vicky, girl, you got it good!!!!!! I'm so damn jealous right now :homer: You have no idea. I think I'm spitting fire :heha: Seriously, though. THis is just great, babe. Honestly...it left me breathless. It left me...tingling...it left me...so damn sexually frustrated!!! :heat:

Vicky, girl you got some skills! Taking him in like that :slem: I envy you :fine: Did you like it, babe?? Did he give it to you good?? Just like you wanted?? I bet he did. He had me panting...and he wasn't even doing ME!

:toofunny:

Damn....I wonder who the next victim is...:hmm:


This is soooo damn exciting!!

:crazylol:

I promise not to go crazy anymore :heha:

:bighug:

Yana21st March 2011 09:16 AM

:rescue:

I said it once and I'll say it again: VICKY...YOU'RE A LUCKY WOMAN!!!

And @ Nicki : :worshipping:

You girls rock!!!! :yourock:

Lenore21st March 2011 11:11 AM

@ Line's chapter: 

Oh my gosh! Line, Nicki... that was just amazing! :thud:

Nicki, you are just something! You write so fantastically, I am soo jealous! In a good way of course, but still! Sooo jealous! :ninja: I love how your writing flows; how beautifully the conversations develop; how naturally and real it seems!! I love the way you write Michael's thoughts and insights! His little quirks! His little comments to himself! I was soo amused when he recited Martin Luther King about his d.ick! :toofunny: Not to mention his slips in the beginning when he was trying to get into Don Juan mode with Line - who very nicely kept a classy and slightly standoffish pose! :slem: Still arrogant he was even though it had been some time since he'd fished; and I really thought he deserved having to fight a little! :heha:

Now for the steamy part... damn girl! :thud: It sooo good from beginning to end! The foreplay was sooo :faint: And the f.cuking.. OH MY GOD!!!!http://r19.imgfast.net/users/1914/14...les/921667.gif

Oh it was AMAZING!! SOOOO AMAZING!! You one lucky lucky girl, Line!! You really really are!!! :thud:

kajexa0321st March 2011 12:00 PM

Nicki, my love-

I ... :dizzy:

you... :ohmy:...

that ... was ... just .... :thud:

I'm just :speechless: ....

THIS IS IT f.uckin' stud muffin Michael????!!!! :thud:

D.ick powered by DURACELL!!!! :drool: f.uuuuuccccckkkkkkkkk!!!!!!!

You shall receive the dirtiest, funk-nastiest most smut-worthy comment that I can muster when I gather my friggin' thoughts! :rescue:


Vicky, my love- I've only THREE words for you love:

You ... Got ... Screwed!!! :ripsad:

I bid you 'adieu' while I go find a 'closed for repairs' sign to hang on your c.ooch! :wink:



Smokin' hot d.amn women!

vicky21st March 2011 12:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kajexa03 (Post 875004)
Vicky, my love- I've only THREE words for you love:

You ... Got ... Screwed!!! :ripsad:

I bid you 'adieu' while I go find a 'closed for repairs' sign to hang on your c.ooch! :wink:



Smokin' hot d.amn women!

BAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHHAAHHAHA OMFG closed for repairs gurrrrrl you're killing me but you better believe it its closed for action till the next day....Nicki had me screwed alright :slem: dear loooord I'm still heaving from it :dummy:

middy21st March 2011 02:44 PM

Holy mary mother of god:ohmy:
Nicki that was some freaking hot ass horny raw humping rough sex there girl:wild:

Vicky its a wonder your able to walk straight after that:shocked:
Brilliant i loved it x

schnoub21st March 2011 09:33 PM

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Yep, that's my heart beat... flatlining! You killed me with this update! And I could so imagine Vicky, for real lol!

sexyeyes21st March 2011 10:16 PM

Ladies, Ladies, Ladies :wub2:

I just want to say a massive THANK YOU to every one who hit the thanks button and/or commented on Vicky's diary, you guys rock fair play! :bighug: It takes a lot of effort and imagination to keep coming up with these one-shots so those of you who take the time to let us know what you think well it means SO much to us you have no idea :wub2:

And Vicky babe *phew* I'm SO relived you loved your diary. Do you know how much pressure I felt knowing I had to write THE QUEEN OF SMUT'S entry? Probably not... I was sh!tting myself. But hearing you say you loved it makes me SO HAPPY :crazylol:

Thanks again Ladies :yourock:

kajexa0321st March 2011 10:30 PM

^^^ Yeeessssssss- it takes weeks to prepare/plan mentally and about another week to get it down properly so 'mad props' to you my dears!!! You girls are 'truly' the best at it! You deserve the best comment that I'm capable of giving ... and you know I will! :wink:

sexyeyes21st March 2011 10:35 PM

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Originally Posted by kajexa03 (Post 875274)
^^^ Yeeessssssss- it takes weeks to prepare/plan mentally and about another week to get it down properly so 'mad props' to you my dears!!! You girls are 'truly' the best at it! You deserve the bestcomment that I'm capable of giving ... and you know I will! :wink:


Baby you know you're the sh!t too right??? And baby your comment already rocks!!! :wub: love ya

vicky21st March 2011 10:38 PM

Just to add to Nickis post For all those who hit the thanks and those that take the step further to comment THANK YOU because like my gals said it takes alot of effort to plan and come up with something thats not repetitive...we dont want your chapters sounding the same we want each one to be unique suited to the person we are writting for.

SO AGAIN THANK YOU SO MUCH it gives us the encouragement and drive to proceed with the rest of you amazing girs and it shows us just how much you value the effort we have put into these chapters L.O.V.E to you all :bighug:

cptogte21st March 2011 11:03 PM

So I haven't been commenting but I have been reading. I just don't know what to say. You guys render me speechless, which believe me, is very hard to do. You three are wonderful writers of high quality smut. LOL!
Keep it coming and one day I might be able to find better words to express how much I'm enjoying this series.
I am curious to know, how many more installments do you have left to write?

sexyeyes21st March 2011 11:28 PM

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Originally Posted by cptogte (Post 875302)
So I haven't been commenting but I have been reading. I just don't know what to say. You guys render me speechless, which believe me, is very hard to do. You three are wonderful writers of high quality smut. LOL!
Keep it coming and one day I might be able to find better words to express how much I'm enjoying this series.
I am curious to know, how many more installments do you have left to write?


Thank you Jasmine for your kind words :bighug: I'm glad you're enjoying them. And I believe we have another 18 to go :laughehe: hence why it's getting more and more difficult for us to keep these chapters different, imaginative and worth reading :lol3: but hearing from you guys really keeps us going you have no idea :wink:

vicky21st March 2011 11:28 PM

Thank you Jasmine for your honesty, like I said the thank you button is sufficient it tells us that you're around and have appreciated these chapters that have been written and we have 16 chapters I think??? hmmmm need to have a look hehehe and thank you for your compliment :bighug:

IAM_MUSIC22nd March 2011 03:39 AM

DAMN!!!! I am sooo jealous.. Vicky got her world rocked and then some.. WHOO! That's what I'm talking bout, pure SMUT!

apsongbird22nd March 2011 04:53 AM

We I know I'm glad that our comments help... Cuz you Girls Rock my world with all the great chapters... and I hope to read more soon...

You girls are amazing.
Vicky:worshipping:Nikki:worshipping:Kathy :worshipping:

:yourock::loveyou:

sexyeyes22nd March 2011 04:13 PM

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Originally Posted by IAM_MUSIC (Post 875473)
DAMN!!!! I am sooo jealous.. Vicky got her world rocked and then some.. WHOO! That's what I'm talking bout, pure SMUT!

:yay: girl you're here :crazylol: welcome to our smutty brains :laughehe:

suzmary22nd March 2011 07:13 PM

BLOODY HELL!~ You are one sexy girl! I'll be back with a more proper comment in a little bit. Gotta cold shower first! Nikki, you rock! Vicky, girl, DAYUM! :hoplol:

-OFFtheWall-22nd March 2011 07:41 PM

I KNOW I'MA 1,000 YEARS LATE, COMING UP IN HERE....

I just wanted to let ya'll know!! I'm up in here!!

It might take me a while to fully catch up cause ya'll know this thread ain't nothing but Mike's DEEP Stroke Overload!

However, I'm here ready to get my :drool: :heat: :thud: :rescue: the hell on!