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Carley

25th November 2010 12:46 AM

:heat: to Hot chapters in one day :slem: That just was...:thud: hot....*wakes up* Can't wait for the next hot chapter :thud:.....:rescue:

Dirty Dani

25th November 2010 01:15 AM

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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 804998)

“So you wanna suck my c*ck?” I blurt out and watch her bee stung lips drop open, apparently in shock at my question. I'm merely responding to her titillating question that she whispered into my ear during filming earlier today, but the shocked look on her face is priceless.

Epic!!! :heha: Nuff' said! :toofunny:

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Originally Posted by sexyeyes

“Shhhhh” I tell her bringing my index finger up to her lips, “the only talking you’ll be doing for the next hour or so is when you tell me how good my c*ck feels inside your pu$$y.”

:thud:

Nicky... Amazing job!!! ****!!! You made having milk and cookies a whole new experience! :thud: It will never be the same! :heat: F.UCK!!!

Cant wait for the next update! :crazylol:

chicago gal

25th November 2010 03:41 AM

ITC is a hot video, no doubt about it, but for pure sexyness---it's TWYMMF for me. However, with this side story about Michael and Naomi, well DAMN!! I will NEVER look at any of Michael's videos again without thinking about these stories!

so......................THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Yana	25th November 2010 09:34 AM

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Fistina time

I never would have guessed that I would learn new words like this on an MJJ-board:heha:.

Damn, that was so hot, Nicki :rescue:.

You stripped away the innocence of milk and cookies very efficiently.

"strip"

"open your legs-and wide"

"do it"

"suck me"

I loved it when he ordered her around like that. F*ck, that was hot :drool:.

So next up is a collaboration? Nice :highspeed:. Does that mean it's extra long or extra hot? Or maybe both? :dummy:

And it's almost like it's about ME!! :drool:

Except that it's not :aw:.

LMP.........:homer:.

ksimm81

25th November 2010 03:33 PM

Oh gosh :rescue: oh gosh :rescue: oh gosh :rescue:

This thread is SWEET TORTURE!!!!!!!!!!

My panties will be ruined by the time the Video Diaries come to an end :aw:

First off, LOVE the chemistry between Mike and Naomi on the actual short film, so reading this excerpt just makes it all the more ENJOYABLE!! :yes:

Mike is so ARROGANT in this.... :hoplol:
He's so selfish....
I am so turned on by this Mike.

Lawwwwd knows I love a 'take charge' Mikey and he is in full force here!! The way he makes her lie on the bed; the way he orders her to feast on his magic wand.....and the part that got me was when she said 'my turn' and Mike pulled his pants up replying 'your turn what'?

BAHAHAHAHAHAAA!! That was so mean of him!! :tlaugh:

Personally, I would have killed him, but he is Mikey so he can do and say whatever he wants :fine:

Meanwhile, I will never be able to look at a glass of milk and a package of Chips Ahoy cookies with purity and wholesomeness EVER AGAIN.... :ph34r:

This was awesome and I loved every minute of it!!!! :wub:

kajexa03

25th November 2010 04:32 PM

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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 804998)

Hi Nicki! :bighug:

First on the menu is your banner.

It is the b.o.m.b.!!!!! :yes: and I scrolled on down to Naomi and ‘Got Milk’…:shocked: YOWZA!!!! but man is she hot! Hot! HOT!!!! :crazylol:

So after twenty minutes spent preparing breakfast and generally making a mess of the kitchen and our pyjamas, the children and I tuck whole heartedly into our home cooked food.

You started us off so sweetly with the early morning interaction between Father and his eldest son... :aw:... I could picture the little cherubs around the table getting all sticky with Dad! The little syrup spots on their hands, fingers, and in the cotton of their pj’s… :wub: I could even picture Grace’s face as she walked into the room and took a sniff… The illustration was very colorful, girl.

....but what the heck, after last night’s fun, I could murder some French toast myself.

What kind of fun, sistah??? :brow: *listening*

force filled fun.

:heha: HOTSA!!! :slem:

“Can I have some milk Daddy?” Prince says as I accidently spit my juice into his face.

Aww, Nicki??? ^^ This is just... too.d*amned.funny!!!! :toofunny: :toofunny:

As soon as Madonna f*cked up our collaboration with her cheap ass lyrics... Madge? :heha:

Each time I had visions of Naomi’s blow job lips sucking me off, whilst I f*cked her face hard.

D*ick lips??? :tlaugh: This boy gonna give himself carpel tunnel syndrome with all this "Fistina" time!!!! He'll have to wear the glitter glove on the other hand!!! :heha:

Mmm hmm she was a c*ck tease from the off. I remember the first time I saw this girl and the first thing that sprang to mind apart from Nubian Goddess wastrouble.

Initially, I wondered: "can she really be that bad"??? Then I kept reading...

After Herb had a quiet little word in Naomi’s ear telling her she needed to loosen up more, well let's just say ever since, she’s been like a b!tch in heat.

She was extremely touchy feely and at every given opportunity she would be groping something of mine... If she wasn’t touching me, she was touching herself...

At every given opportunity her hands have been finding their way to either touching my arms, or my legs, or squeezing sh!t out of my ass.

She even licked me

…sweet nothings if-you-can-call-them-that, that she’s been whispering into my ear…

…she’s been dry humping my leg for the past two days…

What'a 'ho'! :rolleyes:

But what's funny is... for as much as he talks about 'her', he's not a d*amned bit better. He's been thinking of nothing but filming her for his 'collection' AND he's so sure that he'll be successful, that he sets things up beforehand! Dude, :nono:... You can't talk about nobody homie... then again, she’s being such a brazen h.u.s.s.y. that there was really no need for him to question his chances for ‘success’! :laughehe:

One more time for good measure: Naomi? :brow: What a ‘ho’! :rolleyes:

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Needless to say, I ‘love’ the names he gives to his… umm, “area”

Dr. Black

The Force

“So you wanna suck my c*ck?”

My, my – didn’t waste any time did he??? I can see them :chatting: about filming, the heat, the last take, the next take, when shooting wraps, and then…

“So you wanna suck my c*ck?”

^^^ It’s a wrap… I’m laughing my a** off!!! :toofunny: Hot AND funny!!!

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I just ‘love’ this MJ! Confident, self-assured… even cocky, arrogant… bossy, forceful… Yum! :mmm:

I can’t help but thrust my semi hard c*ck into her stomach letting her feel the effect she’s having on me…

…I slowly grind myself into her.

…I order her “to strip.”

…“open your legs –and wide.”

“Do it,” I command.

“C’mere,” I command with a low growl.

I order her to “suck me.”

…“yesssssss” and “suck it harder…”

…“Go on”…

…“No scratching”…

…“Yeah sing for it girl”…

…“Go on”…

and he's horny… ALL the d.amn time!!!

Feeling them pressed into my chest earlier had me imaging what it would be like to f*ck them.

…each time her scent wafts past my nostrils, the more excited the forcebecomes.

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“the only talking you’ll be doing for the next hour or so is when you tell me how good my c*ck feels inside your pu$$y.”

…’and there she goes’… :thud:

“Lay down on the bed and lemme see what ya got,”

As ‘soon’ as I can get myself upright, I read ^^ and :thud: *rubbing the bump on my head* I’m going to get a d.amned concussion!

Okay… so… the whole Naomi ‘self-manipulating’ for MJ’s viewing pleasure was s.m.o.k.i.n.’ hot!!!! :heat: but…

I arch my back when she takes near enough the entire length of my c*ck inside her mouth, until it hits the back of her throat. Oooooo that feels soooo good…

:eek: I got a visual of her in those three ‘scant’ pieces of white cloth on her knees real ‘cat-like’ with her face connected to a sway-backed MJ via his ‘huMAN bridge’ and… :thud:… :rescue:… You’re killing me, Nicki! You’re really killing me…

OMG!!! The ‘entire’ fellatio scene was just too much for the ole’ heart…

… “my turn?”

…“your turn what?”

…“you said you wanted to suck my c*ck, so I let you!”

“Are you f*cking serious? You’re going to leave me like this? After I swallowed your sh!t too?”

^^^ This whole exchange was funny.as.h.*ell!!!!! :tlaugh: :tlaugh: And I know that I shouldn’t be laughing because, as a woman, that is some triflin’ sh!t that Michael did to her…. But ooo-wee, him stuffing it back into his pants and zipping up like “okay. Break time over and back to work” was just… :tlaugh: I’m catching a cramp!!

… the entire contents of the carton spills onto her naked body and she’s drenched with milk.

“You want a taste?”

“How about we wash you down first eh?”

Taking one of the cookies, I slowly pass it over her stomach and dip it into the milk that’s pooled inside her bellybutton.

When the cookie is nice and soggy I bring it to my lips and take a bite.

My c*ck is leaking all over her ass with my pre-cum in excitement, but to have this much power over this little minx…

Girl, this cookies’n’milk episode combined with the ‘sing for your supper’ (or… ehmm…dessert) has created complete havoc on my psyche. Spanking, smacking, plunging, ramming, rimming the a$$hole, grabbing the jewels while f*ucking doggy style??? :ohmy: :heat: :rescue: :dead1: :ripsad:

I feel my c*ck empty into her heat whilst my eyes practically do a 360 degree roll inside my head.

At this point, I know how he feels. By the time I finished what I call the ‘milk’n’cookie’ segment, my eyes were doing that 360 degree roll to the back of my head too! :yes:

… “let’s go take a shower.”

I get all the way to the end just to find out that they ‘got it’ again in the shower?? :heat: My worrrrrdddddd… That’s a ‘whole other’ chapter!! :grin: :brow: Maybe?? :dontknow:

Oh yeah… that’s right… my ex-wife.

Hell she was just as dirty, if not more so than freaky Naomi.

^^ eh… :dry: I’ll bet. :rolleyes:

Please pardon all of the quotes, but this installment was filled with so many ‘jewels’ that it was very hard for me to choose only a few. :blush:

Fan-ORGASMIC update, Nicki!!!! :slem: :drool: This demanding MJ was just *lick-my-lips-in-slow-motion*!!!!

Got Milk? will never, ever be viewed in the same light!!! And neither will MJ’s moans and other non-decipherable ramblings during the bridge of In the Closet!!!!

Well, I wish I could say that I can’t WAIT for the “ex-wife” but since we gotta… just let him f.uck her hard, fast, and really… Really… REEEAAAALLLLYYY sleaze-grimy-funk-nasty!!!! :crazylol: Bring on the YANA and slap some ‘stank’ on it!!!!!!! Great job~ :wink:

duckfeet

26th November 2010 07:15 AM

For some reason ITC never really did anything for me. Thanks to this chapter and this

http://i597.photobucket.com/albums/t...52-699-475.jpg

I now see that short film in a whole new light.

Great chapter as always.

Oh and I second the motion that YANA should be extremely nasty.

vicky

26th November 2010 07:50 AM

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Originally Posted by duckfeet (Post 805837)

For some reason ITC never really did anything for me. Thanks to this chapter and this

http://i597.photobucket.com/albums/t...52-699-475.jpg

I now see that short film in a whole new light.

Great chapter as always.

Oh and I second the motion that YANA should be extremely nasty.

OMG Misty that picture of Michael I had an orgasm and passed out. Fuuuck...now what i wanted to say as co-author of YANA I will tell you all this, Nicki and I have had several meetings and I WILL TELL YOU ALL that YANA is going to be NASTAY!!!!

Nicki and I are going all out for this little miss Memphis belle aint the picture of innoscence just have that in mind

THANK YOU ALL FOR READING WE ARE OVER THE MOON BY THE REACTION

duckfeet

26th November 2010 08:16 AM

That is seriously one of the sexiest pictures I've ever seen. Where has it been hiding all these years?

sexyeyes

26th November 2010 10:13 PM

First off before I reply to your lovely comments I just want to say how much fun this whole experience has been for me and I couldn't have wished for two better co-authors! Kathy & Vicky :yourock: if there is such a thing as female soul mates, well I think I've found that in you pair my lovely ladies. Seriously we really do share a brain (a filthy one at that :wink:) :lol3:

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Originally Posted by Carley (Post 805012)

:heat: to Hot chapters in one day :slem: That just was...:thud: hot....*wakes up* Can't wait for the next hot chapter :thud:.....:rescue:

:lol3: at your reaction Carley ~ exactly what I was going for :slem: Thank you for reading and the next one ain't gonna disappoint :zipit:

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Originally Posted by Dirty Dani (Post 805029)

Epic!!! :heha: Nuff' said! :toofunny:

:thud:

Nicky... Amazing job!!! ****!!! You made having milk and cookies a whole new experience! :thud: It will never be the same! :heat: F.UCK!!!

Cant wait for the next update! :crazylol:

:roflmao: Milk n Cookies will never be the same eh Dani? I'm so happy :excitebaby: that you liked it! When I found that picture of Naomi I just had to include it in this one-shot and the inspiration came totally from Kathy. She came up with the idea so send your thank-you card to her :lol3:
Also sorry to have kept you waiting hun. Vic told me you were eagerly waiting to read but it took me 2 hours to edit this mo-fo but I'm loving your reaction!

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Originally Posted by chicago gal (Post 805086)

so......................THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

:toofunny: Is that a good thing or a bad thing hun? :lol3: See now I agree that TWYMMF is oozing with sexiness but you can't deny Naomi dry humping MJ in the desert is also sexy?! Well I think it is anyway :lol3: Thanks for reading hun, wait til you read what's next :zipit:

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Originally Posted by Yana (Post 805226)

I never would have guessed that I would learn new words like this on an MJJ-board:heha:.

Damn, that was so hot, Nicki :rescue:.

You stripped away the innocence of milk and cookies very efficiently.

"strip"

"open your legs-and wide"

"do it"

"suck me"

I loved it when he ordered her around like that. F*ck, that was hot :drool:.

So next up is a collaboration? Nice :highspeed:. Does that mean it's extra long or extra hot? Or maybe both? :dummy:

And it's almost like it's about ME!! :drool:

Except that it's not :aw:.

LMP.........:homer:.

Yep the innocence was stripped and torn up here :toofunny: sorry but I couldn't resist! I totally believe that Naomi was/is a nasty girl so I just had to have MJ doing something nasty to her. Plus she seems like a kind of "take charge" woman so MJ ordering her around was to put her in her place!
So yep your namesake is up next and I'd book yourself a bed in the nearest cardiac ward if I was you cuz me and Vicky will be tearing this chick up :zipit:
Thanks for reading and commenting hun it means a lot to us.

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Originally Posted by ksimm81 (Post 805353)

Oh gosh :rescue: oh gosh :rescue: oh gosh :rescue:

This thread is SWEET TORTURE!!!!!!!!!!

My panties will be ruined by the time the Video Diaries come to an end :aw:

First off, LOVE the chemistry between these Mike and Naomi on the actual short film, so reading this excerpt just makes it all the more ENJOYABLE!! :yes:

Mike is so ARROGANT in this.... :hoplol:
He's so selfish....
I am so turned on by this Mike.

Lawwwwd knows I love a 'take charge' Mikey and he is in full force here!! The way he makes her lie on the bed; the way he orders her to feast on his magic wand.....and the part that got me was when she said 'my turn' and Mike pulled his pants up replying 'your turn what'?

BAHAHAHAHAHAAA!! That was so mean of him!! :tlaugh:

Personally, I would have killed him, but he is Mikey so he can do and say whatever he wants :fine:

Meanwhile, I will never be able to look at a glass of milk and a package of Chips Ahoy cookies with purity and wholesomeness EVER AGAIN.... :ph34r:

This was awesome and I loved every minute of it!!!! :wub:

Hi Tree :wave: I've heard so much about you and your fantastic story (I will make it there soon I promise) I'm so happy to hear you enjoyed it :excitebaby:

I agree that by the time this project is over with you may need a new set of panties :lol3: we aim to please though!

Oh and I LOVE take charge Mikey too so I just had to write him like this for my own selfish pleasure :drool:

Keep those Depends close to hand girl cuz the next short is YANA and I'm guessing you know Kathy's & Vicky's feelings about you-know-who? :toofunny:
Can't wait to see your reaction :slem:

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Originally Posted by kajexa03 (Post 805378)

Babe, Wifey No. 1 what can I say? YOU m'dear totally gave me the inspiration to go "there" and it's down to you that "GOT MILK" ever saw the light of day. The ideas you gave which helped me write this short were awesome and when my inspiration was low, you gave me those light bulb moments with your two cents. The whole introduction to the story, I may have wrote it but again totally your idea so thank you babe for helping me so much and I'm so :excitebaby: that you loved it!

Also thank you for getting this little collaboration of the ground, it's been so much fun. I swear I've never laughed so much lately and I love it!!

As for you-know-who girrrrrrl you know I got yo' back and do you really think either of us is gonna have the force make love to her? :yuk: no way Hosea! By the time we're through, she's gonna need a cooch transplant!

You are NOT going to be disappointed.

Love ya babe and I'm so glad I found you:wub2:

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Originally Posted by duckfeet (Post 805837)

For some reason ITC never really did anything for me. Thanks to this chapter and this

http://i597.photobucket.com/albums/t...52-699-475.jpg

I now see that short film in a whole new light.

Great chapter as always.

Oh and I second the motion that YANA should be extremely nasty.

Girl you must be a mind reader because THIS is the exact picture that I found a few days before finishing this short. After drooling over it for an hour I knew I had to write Mike all domineering and this pic sums up exactly what I was going for. I'm glad this could help you see ITC in a different light cuz personally I think it's hot as hell :lol3:
Thanks for reading and commenting and you're gonna love YANA I promise :wink:

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Originally Posted by vicky (Post 805852)

Ditto babe! Wifey No. 2 We're gonna do the un-mentionable with her aren't we? So prepare to be floored Ladies :ninja: Ooooo this is gonna be so much fun xox

kajexa03

26th November 2010 11:55 PM

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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 806168)

Kathy & Vicky :yourock: if there is such a thing as female soul mates, well I think I've found that in you pair my lovely ladies. Seriously we really do share a brain (a filthy one at that :wink:) :lol3:

:blush: Awwwww.... :grouphug:

...but you can't deny Naomi dry humping MJ in the desert is also sexy?! :heat: :drool:

As for you-know-who girrrrrrl you know I got yo' back and do you really think either of us is gonna have the force make love to her? :yuk: no way Hosea! By the time we're through, she's gonna need a cooch transplant!

Make love??? :brow: Glad you're seeing it MY way! :smug: :heha:

And oh girllll... the COOCH transplant???? I couldn't even wait for my funnies!!!!

AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHhahahahahahahahahah!!!! :toofunny: :toofunny: :toofunny:

Love ya babe and I'm so glad I found you:wub2:

:whistle:'ling Beyonce's If I Were A Boy: *turns down the lights* hugging and :airkiss:'ing all over your face and then I...

:stop:!!!! Wait... Are 'they' watchin' us?? :ph34r:

:blush2: ahem... *cough*... I'm glad we found each other too, babe!!!! :bighug:

I got my paddle and I'm ready to spank BOTH of ya'll for what you're about to do... *smdh*

Daffodil-Dreams

27th November 2010 12:49 AM

Wow, that was a very good update. It was well written too. Keep up the good work, girls.

So, YANA is next? I thought I saw a "Remember the Time" pic in the siggy picture thing. Either way, I'm looking forward to it. :)

vicky

27th November 2010 07:52 AM

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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 804998)

“So you wanna suck my c*ck?”

Ummmmmmm YESSS PLEASE, hurry up Micahel my tongue and mouth have left the building and are parked outside the trailer waiting for you. Do you even have to ask??

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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 804998)

“You want this,” I breathe into her ear.

“the only talking you’ll be doing for the next hour or so is when you tell me how good my c*ck feels inside your pu$$y.”

“Lay down on the bed and lemme see what ya got,” I tell her.

“C’mon girl I know you ain’t shy, lemme see what you got,” I coax as I lean back and make myself more comfortable in my chair before I say “open your legs –and wide.”

“Do it,” I command.

“suck me.”

I hear myself every now and then saying “yesssssss” and “suck it harder…”

“Ooooo girl you want this? Yeah that’s right… Oooo arrggghhh yesssss suck it girrrrl”

I hear her say “my turn?”

With an amused expression I taunt “your turn what?” watching her reaction with a grin as I place the force inside my jeans that I’ve stepped back into.

and that ladies is how you take an amazonian goddess, grab her by the pussy and wipe the floor. BABE I DIED, Oh god help my hubby because I will rip him apart, raaaawrrrr

But you didnt srop there did you you naughty, sexay, orgasmic woman you took the one thing that in my household is like the most prizsed possession and turned it into this...

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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 804998)

“I’m thirsty,” she says as I watch her retrieve a carton of milk from the refrigerator.

Before long the entire contents of the carton spills onto her naked body and she’s drenched with milk.

OOOOOOKKKKAYYY i wont be looking at milk the same way but i guess if yiu need to cool down thats the way to go right?? That was HOT!!! and the picture really drove the vision home LOVED IT, from the milk pouring to the cookie dipping an eating. Man sex and food just really make Vicky a horny woman and the sex, the thrusting, the thumping, "THE FORCE" good lord please help me as I try, try to get a grip of my clacker which by now is dragging on the floor, and at least save some face as I try to make it through this chapter. DID the lord hear my prayer??? BZZZZZZZZZZZZZ NOPE and I swear I saw "THE LIGHT"

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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 804998)

I coast my fingers with her juices and then start to slowly tease the opening of her ass hole by make circles - rimming her. Straight away she bucks her ass wildly and screams for me to“go deeper.”

“Your wish is my command,” I mock before I plunge my middle finger into her second hole and push up as far as it will go.

The torture I’m inflicting upon her is being reciprocated tenfold when I feel her spasm so hard that I fear she’s going to cut off the circulation to my d!ck.

GOOD LORD have mercy on me.....NICKIIIIII you tortured me non-stop *whines* I never, ever did anything to you, whhhhy do you give me this torturous pleasure??? and then the shower??? No wonder Naomi couldnt keep her hands off him Dr. Black taught her a lesson, a nice loooong, haaaaard, in your mouth lesson.

BABE MY GOD thanks twinny I LOVEEED IT!!!!!!!!

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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 804998)

Oh yeah… that’s right… my ex-wife.

Hell she was just as dirty, if not more so than freaky Naomi.

OHHH BOY LOL this is going to be fun to write I cannot wait and to both my gals, thank you for all the fun we're having its a cyber slumber psrty every day love you both :wub:

damita143

27th November 2010 05:23 PM

I LOVE YOU LADIES!!! I am definitely going to come back and comment on each story individually. These stories are amazing!!! All three chapters left me speechless!!! Excellent writing!! Can't wait for more!

sexyeyes

27th November 2010 09:44 PM

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Originally Posted by kajexa03 (Post 806204)

I got my paddle and I'm ready to spank BOTH of ya'll for what you're about to do... *smdh*

Oooooo is that a promise?! Serioulsy babe have you met me and Vicky? This is soooooooo not a threat, more like a fantasy :slem:
BTW B's IIWAB? One of my Favourite songs ever!!! Sing it to be baby..... If I were a boy..... :wink:

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Originally Posted by Daffodil-Dreams (Post 806232)

Wow, that was a very good update. It was well written too. Keep up the good work, girls.

So, YANA is next? I thought I saw a "Remember the Time" pic in the siggy picture thing. Either way, I'm looking forward to it. :)

Thanks for commenting hun we're glad you enjoyed it! We do try our best don't we Ladies? :wink:

Ooooo busted! RTT was supposed to be next and well spotted, however we decided to mix things up a bit and YANA will be next, then RTT! Apologies for the confusion but it'll be well worth it all the same....

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Originally Posted by vicky (Post 806422)

"LET ME LICK YOU UP AND DOWN, LET ME PLAY WITH YOUR BODY BABY!!!!"

These are the words I hear and kept hearing as a mantra whilst reading this chapter

WOOOOOOO BAAAAAABY DID YOU WIPE THE FLOOR WITH NAOMIS PUSSY

You BLEW me away baby BLEWWWWW me away if my left tit lands on your doorstep please be kind enough to wrap it up in bubble wrap and ship it back to Melbourne for me. WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT?!?! That wasnt amazing, awesome or even brilliant that was EXPLOSIVE, EROTIC, DEMANDING, I WILL F*CK YOU TILL MY D!CK FALLS OFF SEX.....

Nicki, Nicki, Nicki ABSOF*CKINGLUTELY one of the best SMUT chapters I have ever read GURRRRRL if I hear any of that bs from your mouth again i will slap you silly using MJ's d!ck, mmmm well maybe not because all I'll be hearing from you is bs :bleh:

Where do we start?? Normally i would start from the start but naaa huhh we start from the good stuff, the pot of gold, the 'O' in orgasm.....Michael was one hot sexy ass, smooth criminal, bad, Streetwalking son of a gun....Lets start with the SEXtionsn that caught my eyes...

Ummmmmmm YESSS PLEASE, hurry up Micahel my tongue and mouth have left the building and are parked outside the trailer waiting for you. Do you even have to ask??

and that ladies is how you take an amazonian goddess, grab her by the pussy and wipe the floor. BABE I DIED, Oh god help my hubby because I will rip him apart, raaaawrrrr

But you didnt srop there did you you naughty, sexay, orgasmic woman you took the one thing that in my household is like the most prizsed possession and turned it into this...

OOOOOOKKKKAYYY i wont be looking at milk the same way but i guess if yiu need to cool down thats the way to go right?? That was HOT!!! and the picture really drove the vision home LOVED IT, from the milk pouring to the cookie dipping an eating. Man sex and food just really make Vicky a horny woman and the sex, the thrusting, the thumping, "THE FORCE" good lord please help me as I try, try to get a grip of my clacker which by now is dragging on the floor, and at least save some face as I try to make it through this chapter. DID the lord hear my prayer??? BZZZZZZZZZZZZZ NOPE and I swear I saw "THE LIGHT"

GOOD LORD have mercy on me.....NICKIIIIII you tortured me non-stop *whines* I never, ever did anything to you, whhhhy do you give me this torturous pleasure??? and then the shower??? No wonder Naomi couldnt keep her hands off him Dr. Black taught her a lesson, a nice loooong, haaaaard, in your mouth lesson.

BABE MY GOD thanks twinny I LOVEEED IT!!!!!!!!

OHHH BOY LOL this is going to be fun to write I cannot wait and to both my gals, thank you for all the fun we're having its a cyber slumber psrty every day love you both :wub:

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Originally Posted by damita143 (Post 806575)

DUDE I LOVE THIS SONG!!!! "Let me play with your body baby, get you real HOT!"

Twinny Baby I L.O.V.E. you enthusiasm and for that, there's NO WAY IN HELL I can be dicing up your AWESOME reply!!!

I'm just so happy :grin: that you loved it cuz for a while I had myself worried about sharing a co-author title with your fine self! I mean have you read QMD? duh of course you have you friggin wrote it but seriously sharing the spotlight with the Queen of Smut!!! Intimidated much? :lol3:

I guess I was putting too much pressure on myself and I swear I'll never doubt myself again although..... *drifts off to you slapping me with MJ's d!ck and the thought of this actually happening*:lol3: maybe I WILL doubt myself again just to have you create this visual one more time :slem: I'm such a perv I know but in you my fellow smut worshipper I've definitely found my twin! Kathy's my boo but you are my twin :wub2:
I love our little chats but all I seem to have on the brain lately is d!ck and that's cuz of you babe! But who am I kidding right? Like it wasn't on the brain before our convo's started :lol3:

Ok for the line...."if my left tit lands on your doorstep please be kind enough to wrap it up in bubble wrap and ship it back to Melbourne for me."
:toofunny: you seriously had me p!ssing my pants when I read this! I actually had tears streaming down my face.
Too fu**ing funny hun :roflmao:

Seriously twinny thank you for you reply I :wub: you :blush:

So no pressure for YANA eh girl? This is gonna be H.O.T.

Ladies BRACE YOURSELF :grin:

vicky

27th November 2010 09:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 806728)

Oooooo is that a promise?! Serioulsy babe have you met me and Vicky? This is soooooooo not a threat, more like a fantasy :slem:

Kathy seriously babe a paddle?? Ooooooo baby YEAH!!!!

Twinny Baby I L.O.V.E. you enthusiasm and for that, there's NO WAY IN HELL I can be dicing up your AWESOME reply!!!

I'm just so happy :grin: that you loved it cuz for a while I had myself worried about sharing a co-author title with your fine self! I mean have you read QMD? duh of course you have you friggin wrote it but seriously sharing the spotlight with the Queen of Smut!!! Intimidated much? :lol3:

I guess I was putting too much pressure on myself and I swear I'll never doubt myself again although..... *drifts off to you slapping me with MJ's d!ck and the thought of this actually happening* :lol3: maybe I WILL doubt myself again just to have you create this visual one more time :slem: I'm such a perv I know but in you my fellow smut worshipper I've definitely found my twin! Kathy's my boo but you are my twin :wub2:

I love our little chats but all I seem to have on the brain lately is d!ck and that's cuz of you babe! But who am I kidding right? Like it wasn't on the brain before our convo's started :lol3:

Ok for the line...."if my left tit lands on your doorstep please be kind enough to wrap it up in bubble wrap and ship it back to Melbourne for me."

:toofunny: you seriously had me p!ssing my pants when I read this! I actually had tears streaming down my face.

Too fu**ing funny hun :roflmao:

Seriously twinny thank you for you reply I :wub: you :blush:

So no pressure for YANA eh girl? This is gonna be H.O.T.

Ladies BRACE YOURSELF :grin:

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HEHEHEEHEHE BABY WE ARE BRINGING IT LIKE NEVER BEFORE, LISA SHOULD BRACE HERSELF

suzmary

28th November 2010 02:38 AM

THUD

Ok, that was me, keeled over, having read all three installments so far. Girls, you're really gonna kill either me or my poor unsuspecting hubby, whom I shall take this rauncy hot sexy drooling lust out on! If only he knew the impetus behind his WILD WIFE!

Seriously, though, these stories ROCK MY SOCKS! Not sure how I feel about the next one, though, cuz I'm so not a fan of the little missus! I'd seriously rather get my gums scraped. But I'm sure in your hot sexy hands, girls, it will be one HAWT number!

Lenore

29th November 2010 02:19 PM

Nicki!! OH MY F*CKING GOD!!!!! http://oi51.tinypic.com/z95k3.jpg

Girl, you are GENIUS!!! And you writing is FANTASTIC!! AMAZING!!! FLAWLESS, SEXY, WONDERFULLY DESCRIPTIVE AND DETAILED and giiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiirl, do YOU have talent for writing good sex!!!!!

Oh my LORD, I'm speechless! I'm breathless! I'm dying here!!! :thud: It was... perfect!! In every possible way!! Too hot!! Let me bow to you! :worthy::worthy::worthy: And thank you... deeply!! For this amazing masterpiece of smut!! For the PERFECTION of it!! Absolute PERFECTION!!!

I love you!! I do! I loved you already for being one of my most amazing readers but now I even love you more!! You're genius, girl! Genius!! :wub:

And for my late comeback for another review on TWYMMF:

Kathy; I just gotta start by saying, that I absolutely LOVE your writing!! It's so expressive and soo wonderful! You've inspired me into making my writing more expressive as well!! Your amazing prologue and now this chapter... man... simply beautiful!! Just... AMAZING!! :wub:

Now for the pure sexiness:

I don't like Tatiana! Nope, I don't like her at all!! But WOW!!! Does she know how to work on our man!!! :thud: Now since it's been a few days since I read it (and I'm in no state of reading it again - I'm already too hot and bothered from ITC and I have to leave soon) I'm gonna show you what made me go http://r19.imgfast.net/users/1914/14...les/921667.gif :

First of all... his sex noises!! His hisses, his moans, groans and stuttering... DAMN IT!!! :heat: Picturing him talking like that during sex makes me sooo :thud:!! (And Naomi's stuttering too, Nicki... the whole thing was just... wow!!)

Quote:

”Ughhh, girl… ooo- suuuuucccckkkkk”…

[...]

“Sssssssshhhhhh*iiiiiiittttttt,” was the only sound I could make as I wriggled my a$$ just enough to tickle her voice box.

[...]She sucked in thereby creating an even tighter space for me and “ssssssshhhhhh*iiiiiiittttttt” became “oooooooooohhhhhh” as she slowly began to bob her head to the beat of the music.

[...]
“Gaahhhh – you feel incredible, baby. Faster”…

Oh damn!! :thud: ****, that's just way too hot!! It is!! WAY!! TO!! HOT!! :rescue:

But this takes the prize of painfully horny sex talk quotes:

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“Oh baby- I... cuuuuuuuuuummmmmmmmmm”!!!! I didn’t think to ask her if she took it in her mouth and I didn’t give a f*uck if she spit or swallowed. I only knew that from that day forward, I’d view record this in my mind as the longest note I ever held! My eyes walled into the back of my head so hard that I thought clear vision would never return.

“Ohhhhhh babbbbbyyyyy ggggiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiirrrrrrrrrrrllllllllllllllllll”…. I wailed loudly as I washed her throat good with my ‘special sauce’ for what seemed like minutes!

Take me Michael!! Take me now and please please pleeease say those exact same things; and I'll live happily ever after on that memory alone!! :heat:

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Every muscle in my body shivered and seized – including my anus.

Strike one... :heat:

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The first woman to bring that to my attention hurt my feelings initially. I thought it was a deformity until she stroked it like a newborn baby, named it ‘the g-spot tickler,’ let me put her a$$ in ‘the buck’ and f*uck her until we both lost consciousness!

Oooh I loove that you gave yourself time to describe his lil' banana d*ck! :slem: He's got a hook!! Big cutie! :wub:

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Taking the reins from that point forward, I buried my d*ick deep inside her as far as I could.

Strike... :heat:...two... :thud:

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“Ahhhh… shhhhiiiii*tttt,” I exclaimed as I accepted her unspoken signal to f*uck her with more urgency. Because I was in control, I moved her hips up and down on my swollen c*ock as I tried to ram it far enough inside her to push out a lung!

Oh ****!! :thud: Strike three!! :rescue:

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I secretly hoped she had the strength and stamina to hold on. She must have had the same thought in her mind because we simultaneously freed a hand to stimulate each other’s most sensitive spots – she, my balls and me, her clit. I prayed that my animalistic thrusting would not shatter the glass, but I had to satisfy my need to power-drive her p*ussy!

Strike... f...:rescue: :dead1:

kajexa03

30th November 2010 05:46 AM

Time for another episode of…. Drumroll please (da-da-da-di-dat-ta-da-daaaaaaaahhhhh)

:heha: Kathy’s Favorite Funnies (Volume III: In the Closet ) :heha:

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Originally Posted by Yana (Post 805226)

And it's almost like it's about ME!! :drool:

Except that it's not :aw:.

LMP.........:homer:.

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Originally Posted by ksimm81 (Post 805353)

...the way he orders her to feast on his magic wand.....

And this (below) :brow:, bears repeating... OVER and OVER again... :heha:

...when she said 'my turn' and Mike pulled his pants up replying 'your turn what'?

*Tsk,tsk* Vicky... Vicky... Vicky... TOP HONOR my sistah!!!! You 'brought' the funny... :give_flowers:

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Originally Posted by vicky (Post 806422)

...WOOOOOOO BAAAAAABY DID YOU WIPE THE FLOOR WITH NAOMIS PUSSY!!!

...if my left tit lands on your doorstep please be kind enough to wrap it up in bubble wrap and ship it back to Melbourne for me.

...if I hear any of that bs from your mouth again i will slap you silly using MJ's d!ck

and that ladies is how you take an amazonian goddess, grab her by the pussy and wipe the floor.

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Originally Posted by suzmary (Post 806874)

...cuz I'm so not a fan of the little missus! I'd seriously rather get my gums scraped.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lenore (Post 807766)

...his lil' banana d*ck! :slem: He's got a hook!!

Ladies!!! You're just too much! I 'swear' my funnies are getting funnier everytime...

:toofunny: :toofunny: :toofunny: :toofunny: :toofunny: :toofunny:
:toofunny: :toofunny: :toofunny: :toofunny: :toofunny: :toofunny:

Side note: Tree, those d*amned Depends were so darned funny that they deserve honorable mention! AGAIN!!! :give_rose: :heha:

Karen, :wave:

OMG! You're 'too' kind. Your comment RE: TWYMMF had me at work like *bling* :grin:!!! Teeth all showing and stuff... Folks looking at me like I been smokin' dat -ish! :slash: :heha: Seriously, gosh... :blush: THANK YOU! I'm 'so' freakin' glad that you enjoyed it and that you went into such great detail to illustrate just how!!!! I 'truly' think you're awesome and I can't wait to have a little more interaction with you and 'The Interview' crew!!!! :yay:

I... I.... I just... :loveyou:!!!!! :kiss2:

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Originally Posted by vicky (Post 806422)

...and to both my gals, thank you for all the fun we're having its a cyber slumber party every day love you both :wub:

Vicky, baby.... ^^^ Ditto! You ladies seriously have 'no' idea how much I look forward to 'speaking' with both of you each day. I find myself running home from work in the afternoons and taking every break I can at work just to 'chat'. People who know me and know that I have no life are thinking that I must have a new boyfriend on the down-low. :laughehe:

I say 'no', but I have some really SUPER new girlfriends!!! :wink: :grouphug:

I'm 'sooo' glad that MJJB has brought us together and not 'just' us, but so many other wonderful relationships that we've formed!

Let's toast :cheers:... to Michael... to this board... and to our 'family'....

May we always stay 'in love' like this For All Time! :wub: :cloudnine: :wub2:

vicky

30th November 2010 07:54 AM

Hey everyone YANA is coming Nicki and I are working extra hard to get YANA posted, IT WILL be posted within the next 24hrs, we are tweaking it, adding and editing...THANK YOU FOR YOUR PATIENCE

Lenore

30th November 2010 01:37 PM

^^ WAAAHHH!!! :crazylol: I can't waaait!! :excitebaby:

sexyeyes

30th November 2010 02:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lenore (Post 807766)

Nicki!! OH MY F*CKING GOD!!!!! http://oi51.tinypic.com/z95k3.jpg

Girl, you are GENIUS!!! And you writing is FANTASTIC!! AMAZING!!! FLAWLESS, SEXY, WONDERFULLY DESCRIPTIVE AND DETAILED and giiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiirl, do YOU have talent for writing good sex!!!!!

I love you!! I do! I loved you already for being one of my most amazing readers but now I even love you more!! You're genius, girl! Genius!! :wub:

Aw :blush2: you have me giggling like a school girl doll :wub:

Now you KNOW how much I LOVE The Interview so this ^^^ coming from You! :excitebaby: I guess I'm just a perv and that's where my inspiration comes from :lol3: and no need to bow babe cuz two words = Dirty Diana :slem: Yeah you know what I'm talking about :thud: had me squirming in my chair reading that chappy. That song was already a favourite of mine but every time I hear it now, my mind flashes back to reading that chapter and I'm imagining it's me sat backstage waiting for MJ to f*ck me senseless :drool:

I love you too babe and genius coming from you? :wub2: So glad I could return the favour and make you all warm and fuzzy inside cuz Lord knows how many times you've made me feel like that :wink:

michelle1

30th November 2010 04:41 PM

Oh................my.........................God, sooooo hot and sexy!!!!! I think I need to change my underwear. :thud:

MJJSmash28

30th November 2010 04:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by vicky (Post 808341)

Hey everyone YANA is coming Nicki and I are working extra hard to get YANA posted, IT WILL be posted within the next 24hrs, we are tweaking it, adding and editing...THANK YOU FOR YOUR PATIENCE

:dance: :cheerleader: :strawberry: :woop: :excitebaby: :pineapple:

YAY!!!

Can't wait!!

-OFFtheWall-

30th November 2010 08:30 PM

I gotta get my mind right, and turn on the RED light :slem: when I start my quest on catching up! lol I'ma drop my comments when I get done with all my :thud: and :rescue: because I know that is going to happen repeatedly...

And then I have to head to Aunt Vicky's QMD...

Let me just start repenting now...Lord forgive me for the thoughts that will arise in the process of my reading, Amen...:angel:

Yana	30th November 2010 08:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by vicky (Post 808341)

Hey everyone YANA is coming Nicki and I are working extra hard to get YANA posted, IT WILL be posted within the next 24hrs, we are tweaking it, adding and editing...THANK YOU FOR YOUR PATIENCE

HURRRYYYY!!!!!!!!!!http://img573.imageshack.us/img573/4779/kermitm.gif

sexyeyes

30th November 2010 08:57 PM

Jazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzi ^^^^ girl get yo' bible and rosary beads out cuz you gon' need em :toofunny:

Yana, Kermit :roflmao: too f*cking funny girl

ksimm81

30th November 2010 11:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Yana (Post 808608)

HURRRYYYY!!!!!!!!!!http://img573.imageshack.us/img573/4779/kermitm.gif

Yes, please hurry!! :timer:

This DEPENDS diaper will only hold but for so long :aw:

:hoplol:

sexyeyes

30th November 2010 11:15 PM

^^^^ Tree :toofunny: :toofunny: :toofunny:

Yana girl Kermit STILL has me p!ssing my pants every time I see it!! :roflmao:

Ngbballgyrl15

30th November 2010 11:17 PM

Kathy! Thank you girl for putting me on! I've been sitting here not doing my work for class btw and read through the story thus far and I must say you guys are goin' in! I love every bit of it especially Michael *sigh* His attitude is hella sexy and of course you always gotta have love for Michael the jerk. In the back of mind I always think about Michael f*cking the dog sh!t outta all his female leads so of course this ff is perfect for me lol Thanks again and I can't wait to what happens with the YANA video, I mean they were damn near naked on the set so that's like perfect for him lol

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