V is for Victory... MJJBComments


Off.the.wall9th March 2011 10:08 PM
Ohhhh my GAWWWWD I LOVE THIS!!!!! Not only was it incredibly sexy and steamy it was really humorous!

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“Don’t get fresh with me boy – you’re not too old to be put over my knee for a good old fashioned spanking—“

“Oooo is that a promise?”
LMFAO! I swear to God I instantly had an image of Liz bending Michael over her knee and spanking him. I mean it literally flashed in my mind for a split second then vanished but the image I saw was pretty comical. Could you imagine that?! :eek:

I LOVED the whole tiger bit. Seriously there were so many sexual innuendo's in this chapter it's not even funny. (No I lied it was extremely funny.)

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“You wanna see my tiger?” I blurt out.

“Excuse me?” she gasps in shock and I realize in my half-drunken state that she must think I’m referring to my penis! Dammit why didn’t I say tigers? Me and my non-pronunciation of the plural! Cuz what I’m actually referring to is Thriller and Sabu my Bengal Tigers… and NOT my penis!
:tlaugh::toofunny::toofunny2: Oh my god that had me dying! I swear you're imagination is just beyond brilliant. And of course the amazing smutty parts that had me lying on my floor convulsing because they were so freaking hott!! Such a good update Nicki you've out done yourself if that's even possible! Amazing amazing UH-MAZE-ING! I love you so much for this. :bighug:

WHOOOOOO Can't wait to see what's to come next and again AWESOME JOB GIRL!!!! :worthy:

Carley9th March 2011 10:27 PM
Nickie Hun, That was just so good. :heat: Line you lucky girl!! :)

Librian9th March 2011 10:51 PM
I.... I'm... I.... :thud:

I have to get back to you when I start breathing again, Nicki...

apsongbird9th March 2011 11:01 PM
HOT HOT HOT

My fave line..

I kneel in order to roll her panties off of her hips and she helps me to remove the suspender belt that’s been holding her stockings firmly in place all night.

grah... I only picture this :crazylol:

vicky9th March 2011 11:10 PM
LIIIIIIIINE!!!!!
OMG you lucky lucky lucky girl in the end you got your rights served

Danm Nicki that was soooo frigging HOOOOOOOT!!!! I MY GOD and Innosence Era Mike WOOO HOOO the man knew how to dress and look sharp in a suite thats for sure......gahhhhh so many favourite parts but the one that stands out has to be

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“Tell Mikey how much you love his big rock hard c.ock Line,”
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GIURRRLs I will give you my full commentry later *takes deep breath in*

suzmary10th March 2011 01:33 AM
Nicki, girl, no wonder you were having a drought wiht the other story! You had THIS MASTERPIECE running around in there.

OMG, I can't find words enough right now. I'mma go jump on my husband's Tiger and act out a fantasy, thanks to you! Line, you are one lucky girl. Stockings, tigers and Michael Jackson in the sack. Dayum!

I'll be back when I'm "done" okay? :blush2: :hoplol: :dance: :yes:

MJJSmash2810th March 2011 02:04 AM
Line, gurlll, you are one lucky lady.

I'm at a loss for words right now.

suzmary10th March 2011 04:10 AM
I can't even... I'm still up there in the clouds! I am going back upstairs to my man. I'll be biting my lip so I don't say the wrong name! :blush2:

I'll come back tomorrow when I've recovered.

:yourock:

mjfan♥forever10th March 2011 08:46 AM
Ohmygod

:thud:

Nicki, you're gonna get me fired!!!

I was on break when I was reading this naughty chapter...in the dining room actually...i work in a fast food restaurant...and when I was reading this...I think I gave out a scream cuz everyone looked at me. :eek: Then my friend was like "what were you reading?" And i was like "i was reading about Orion's belt, tigers and rock hard cocks."

Line, babe, you are one lucky woman. Girl your fantasy almost got me fired :heha: But hell, Innocent Era Mike :heat:...I'll get myself fired for him in a blink of an eye :slem:....oooohhh yeeeaahhh!!

Nicki, you are brilliant babe. And since you got me, girl with this one and the other one you posted...f.uck I'm drooling with anticipation for my turn babe...like i said babe....get me good...get me good and hard.....:heha:

Seriously though, Line....you okay, babe?? Are you exhausted?? Did his rock hard cock get you good??? Lol you lucky woman you!! :bleh:

Love this so much!!!! Can't wait to see who's next!!!!!!!!

May the FORCE be with you all!!!!!

:crazylol:

middy10th March 2011 03:18 PM
Line hun your one lucky girll:heat:
This line was classic... “You wanna see my tiger?” :toofunny:
Brilliantly horny chapter nicki as always x
MJLOVER2310th March 2011 03:41 PM
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!:drool: That was hot :heat:. And because of that, my husband thanks you royally. After reading that I had to do the same thing as suzmary and act that out on my husband. This is husband right now :cloudnine:

I agree with everyone else my favorite line out of that chapter was "Wanna see my tiger?"

That was great!!!!!!!!!!!

Line, girl congrats. And thank u for sharing ur fantasy with us. It is MUCH APPRECIATED!!!!

And Nicki...KU-DOS!!!! Wonderful writing.

JHazelEyes08068910th March 2011 04:51 PM
*reads Line's chapter*

:eek:

:thud:

:nuffintosay:...atm

*will come back after finding her yoni in China*

Mary:dead1:

Librian10th March 2011 07:15 PM
Okay, I'm breathing again. I must admit that I had to take another sneak peak at work today. Nooot the best place to read stuff like this :hehe:

Thanks for the birthday present, Nicki. Much appreciated :lol:

You have NOOOO idea what it's like to come to this thread and see YOUR name and YOUR story :ph34r:

And on to the comments... I'm gonna comment as I go, because I think you deserve getting my thoughts on your work ;)

Imma gonna steal that banner and put it up somewhere at work :badgirl:
Loved the intro btw :happy:

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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 867795)


I was p!ssed. I had explicitly told my family that I didn’t want to do this and what do they do? Well they go behind my back and do the exact opposite of course.
I love how you start off with him not being in a great mood :slem:


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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 867795)

Nice suit? – check!

Starched white shirt? – check!

Black silk tie done up properly by my good friend Elizabeth? – check!
Yeeeeeesss!! You did well, my friend!

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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 867795)

My gaze automatically gets drawn to her in the mirrored shelving behind the bar; I feel my lips curl into the first genuine smile of the night when I see she’s a pretty young thing.

****

“It’s nice to meet you Mr. Jack—“ 

“Please call me Michael or Mike if you’d prefer.” I try my best to give her a wink but winking was never a trick I’d mastered well.

She gives me a confused look and then I realize that I’ve cut her off mid-sentence but I try to recoup by clasping her dainty hand inside my much larger ones as I place a lingering kiss on her warm skin.

I look into her eyes channelling my inner James Bond as I ask, “Where are you from Line? Norway? Sweden?” 

“Denmark actually Mr. Jack- uh Michael,” she scowls at me abruptly pulling her hand free from my clutches, sh!t I actually think I’ve pissed her off. Geography was never my strongest subject at school but considering how much travelling I’ve done over the years I should have recognized that Danish accent immediately and I inwardly give myself a kick for my rooky mistake. The look on her face says it all – she thinks I’m a complete idiot! 
The last part had me laughing so hard. That was so much fun! I could feel the awkward situation and Michael's thoughts made it all better. I'm still laughing.

I liked how he was watching me. The thought of Michael checking you (me!!) out. Ooooh lord :shy: I think I died a little.

And getting us drunk? Best idea EVER!
Plus how did you know I'm a white wine type of gal... You scare me:ph34r:


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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 867795)


“You wanna see my tiger?” I blurt out.

“Excuse me?” she gasps in shock and I realize in my half-drunken state that she must think I’m referring to my penis! Dammit why didn’t I say tigers? Me and my non-pronunciation of the plural!

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“I’m sorry… *giggle* I thought… *giggle* I thought you meant… *giggle*…” 
MICHAEL?!? Boy, is he straight forward:brow: But I'd loooove to see your tiger, Michael ;)
I love it. Laughed out loud once more. I had to stop reading and just dry my eyes. Classic! And giggling like that... I mean, do you follow me around? Hmm...


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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 867795)


We manage to sneak away from the now dwindling party and I’m surprised that no one even gives us a second glance as we exit the make-shift gazebo into the chilly night air.

“Here take my jacket,” I shrug out of my suit jacket and position it over her bare shoulders – and they say chivalry is dead!

“Thank you Michael… I- uh are you going to be okay, it’s pretty cold tonight.” 

“Nah I’m fine girl, you look like you need it more than m—“ sh!t why did I say that and then look at her nipples that are clearly protruding through the thin fabric of her dress?! Smack my damn head twice and call me stupid.

“I’m sorry Line I didn’t mean… I… I mean it is cold tonight and you’re not wearing a jack—“ 

“Michael its fine honestly, I’m not offended, well maybe a little but *giggle* its fine.” 

I breathe a sigh of relief and reach out for her hand without realizing it, “come, the habitat is this way.” 

****

“See those three stars up there Line,” I point to the night’s sky and direct her gaze to where I’m looking… and it’s on…

“Yes I see them, oh my they’re so beautiful,” she coos.

****

“Girl I’mma have to teach you a few things tonight!” 

“Is that a promise?” 

Did my ears just hear right or has the Jack and Coke seriously messed with my senses? 
You see, when I came to the part where he gives me his jacket (very nice touch btw. I love it! God :rolleyes::wub:) I swear Marvin Gaye's "Lets get it on" started playing in my headphones. Noooo lie! I love how you incorporated the romance and flirting. Very well written! And one of my favourite parts.


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I place a hand against the wall by the side of her head and lean forwards to whisper into her ear, f.cuk it! She’s teased me all night long and it’s now or never – so make your move Jackson!

“Ya know… Thriller and Sabu are like pussycats really…” 

“Hmmmmm,” she aimlessly fiddles with my tie as her blue eyes lock onto mines.

“Now their master on the other hand… well he’s a different story…” 

Her bottom lip sinks deeper into her mouth, her teeth leave visible imprints in her juicy flesh. Slowly I watch her grip at my tie twirling it tighter around her fist as she pulls me towards her and I gladly take that as my cue to kiss her.
The first kiss is important to any story. And this was PERFECT :signheart:
Just right. I wish this had really happened... I still forget to breath as I imagine fiddling with his tie. Dosen't take much to excite me, apparently :blush2:


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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 867795)

I pull her right leg upwards and she curls it around me as I massage her fleshy thigh through the silkiness of her black stockings, my fingers getting lost in the feel of the fabric against her hot skin.

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And effortlessly the black fabric drops to the floor giving me a good look at Line’s delicious body. I run a finger down the length of her spine until it comes into contact with the top of her suspender belt.
Mmmmm stockings and suspenders… my favourite pieces of lingerie on a woman. 

***

I kneel in order to roll her panties off of her hips and she helps me to remove the suspender belt that’s been holding her stockings firmly in place all night. She raises her left leg in the air and I roll the silky stocking down her toned thigh, over her shapely calf placing opened mouthed butterfly kisses against the skin that’s been uncovered. I repeat the same with her right leg and the lust that emits from her eyes tells me all I need to know.
Seriously, you are scaring me! How the hell did ya know I forgot to tell you to incorporate that? I'm glad you read minds, because that was so hot!

The sex part was so hot and.... and I'm very pleased with your work, let me just keep it at that :slem:

Loved the ending as well.
Michael's thoughts were priceless and I cracked up so many times as I read along.

Nicki.... you managed to put so many things in there that I never asked you to, and yet they totally fitted. Girl, have you been spying me on :ph34r: :lol: If so, you did your research well.

I'm amazed at how you made it funny, because that just fits me so well. I could actually see this happening in real life (or... you know what I mean). And the flirting, the seducing and chasing. You did so well, Nicki :bighug:

Thank you!

michelle110th March 2011 08:31 PM
Oh, Sweet Jesus, I think I'm gonna faint....:shocked::heat::heat: Line, you are one lucky woman!!! Nikki, you've done it again! Awesome writing.

Dria&&Michael4Ever10th March 2011 09:36 PM
I was SO exhausted and out of it before I got started on this chapter...but now thanks to a wonderful sextacular Queen of Smut named Nicki, I am WIDE awake! :eek: :crazylol: And when I say wide wake, I mean EVERY part of me is wide awake :heat::blush2::eat1:

THIS is the reason why when it comes to Invincible/Trial era Mike, I say he is the BEST in bed. HANDS DOWN, Invincy/Trial is a f*cking beast of all BEASTS. He knows what he wants, he KNOWS how to get it and he KNOWS how to WORK IT! :drool: DAMN! All those years prior has paid off to make him the ultimate cat daddy! Chasing tail comes as easy as learning the alphabet, boy! Man, how I wish I would have gotten some of that juicy lovin from him during that time, I know I would want for NOT for the rest of my natural born life if I got that TIGER :heat: Shoot, I know he would have laid it on me so good, I would have have to get his face tattooed on my breast, get "Tamed by the Dragon" and his signature under it as a tramp stamp, brand a big, fat, certified red "A+" on his forehead and go out looking for cool things to pimp my wheelchair with cause LAWD KNOWS I will be confined to one after a night with him!!!!

Line, you LUCKY DAMSEL YOU! :homer::bleh: ALL THAT D UP IN YOUR TREASURE TROVE< GIIIIIIIIRRRRLLL YOU IS WELL OFF! HELLS YEAH YOU SHOULD HAVE MIKE AS A DTD!! (**** on the Dial) But on a serious note, I really did appreciate your character in here, it was very unique and kinda reminded me of myself. Acting all coy and/or hard to get but, with the right coaxing/alcohol intake, I'm more compliant and I'm loose as a goose...in more ways than one. :slem: And with Mike....PSSSHHHHH- I probably couldn't formulate a coherent "You see what had happened was" story to tell you in the morning! :heha:

I also like the fact that Michael was already frustrated and vexed. Just the mere thought of sexing him after a particularly stressful day is enough to set me off :drool:

Nicki, you really just out do yourself girlfriend.

And yeahhhhh....and I have like a million things to quote here. :heat:

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“Um could it be the sign formerly known as Prince?” I release my hands from her eyes at the mention of that midgets name; she swings around on her stool and throws me the biggest smile I think I’ve ever seen from her.

“Girl you think I’d ever let that dwarf through my gates let alone have him here at my victory party?”
*SCREAMING LAUGHTER* OMG That WAS RICH! And what makes it even funnier is that when ever I picture Mike and Prince standing next to each other, I see Mike as the softy giant and Prince as the gruff pipsqueak-you know, since Mike is so tall but soft spoken and Prince is short but has this deep ass voice. :hoplol:


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I have a lot to be thankful to Susan Yu for and let me tell you this; if she would grant me the privilege – I would be tapping her ass right this very minute as a repayment for both hers and Tom’s commitment to my case. But get this – I think the lady bats for the other team! I mean why else would she pass up on an invitation to dinner? And not just once I might add… but three blinking times!
*pleasant shudders* okay so THAT alone -BEFORE even getting to the actual FD girl and the actual SCENE- had me moistening up. Imagine helping Michael win this big, grueling case and him being so thankful to you that he just...he just wants to f*ck the living hell out of you in repayment. VICTORY SEX AT ITS FINEST! And Ms. Yu...tsk tsk tsk. If you guys didn't already have the rest of us fans lined up for our chapters, SHE would have to be next! Other team!? GIRL WTF. EVEN IF SHE DID PLAY FOR HE OTHER TEAM, I BET MICHAEL WOULD STILL MANAGE TO SLIDE HER ON OVER TO HIS OUT FIELD! :fine:

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but dang the woman can talk the behind legs off of a donkey!
BWAHAHA! :tlaugh: Nicki, ONLY you! Who THINKS of stuff like that?? LOL

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Yeah right! Clearly honey has a one track mind too, but that’s good to know cuz it means she’s thinking of me in that way.
:hoplol: CLEARLY. And mannn, I would have SO thought the same thing. Thats what happens when you're naturally a sexual person, you're a Scorpio AND you have a buncha dirty, disgusting guy friends :heha:

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I watch her shake her head as she bats her eyelashes at me seductively. Ooooo the old star trick never fails to bag a woman… they seem to love geeky Mike!
:blush2: I LOVE geeky Mike. :girl_glasses::pash::girl_crazy:

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“You heard me, now where’s these Tigers of yours, I hope they don’t bite. They’re in cages right?”

Gurrrrrl your out in the dark with horny old me and you’re worrying about my tigers biting you?
LOL. Now I KNOW he would say something like that forreal. If he can say things like "look at her tiddies" then I know he would. Oh, and :cheeky:

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“Well my tigers told me to tell you that they enjoyed seeing you also tonight Line… I try that winking thing again…

“They did huh… wow you could make yourself some money with those talking tigers..”
The winking failure always wins :toofunny::cute: And Ditto to what I said above, only the roles are switched. I'd say some foolishness like that back. LOL Witty Banter FTW

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“Ya know… Thriller and Sabu are like pussycats really…”

“Hmmmmm,” she aimlessly fiddles with my tie as her blue eyes lock onto mines.

“Now their master on the other hand… well he’s a different story…”
:eek::slem::highspeed:

GOLD


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But as soon as the door closes I let out a long sigh and as I drop my pants that famous saying springs to mind once again, free at last, free at last, thank God Almighty I’m free at last… wow did I just apply Dr. Martin Luther King’s famous words to the plight of my penis? I really need to pull myself together!
AGAIN NICKI! :heha: WHERE DO YOU GET THIS STUFF???!?!?!

Girl, you know I'm lovin it. -air draws McDonald's arches with index fingers with squinty smile-

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maybe the moonlight will make me look hotter?
I found this really funny and really sad for some reason. Sad because...well, we all obviously know :aw: BUT FUNNY because he is this grown ass man thinking something I think a teenage girl would when she's about to loose her virginity. (Or in his case, a really sensitive teenage boy :blush2::hoplol::wub:)

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I love the expressions a woman makes when they’re about to cum and I never get tired of seeing them make those beautiful/ugly faces as they chase their release.
ME AND YOU BOTH MIKE! Well, men in my case :bleh: I swear I could get off on that ALONE.

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“Ahhhhh girl noooo please stoppp I’m gon—“

“Cum,” the little minx whispers into my ear and that word along with her sweet torture of my nuts and the steady stroking
OOOOOOOO LINE! GIRL! :crazylol:
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I grin before pulling out quickly and ramming myself all the way back in – sh!t was that her cervix?

“Aaaaaaahhhhhhhhh Oooooooo Yessssssss deeeeeeeeeper,” f.uck me if I go any deeper I’ll be touching her tonsils.
:heha::toofunny:

Ahhh that feeling though. Its so :heat::highspeed::cheeky: while being :ninja::scared: at the same time. Me loves it though, :eat1:

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Call me a sicko if you like but the feeling of pain mixed with pleasure really turns me on, to the point that I’m f.ucking her so hard it causes her to scratch me even harder, dang I think she’s drawing blood, thas’ gonna hurt in the morning!
Might as well call me a sicko too because I LOVE to do that as well as receive it! :fine: its called HURTIN SO GOOD!! WHOOO!

Seriously though, I LOVE when guys have that built up pain tolerance level. And I have really long nails so its REALLY a turn on for them to get off on/ not mind that I'm scratchin up their back like an alley cat! Mmmmmmmm.......

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I dig my fingers into her shapely ass as I sit up with her still riding the sh!t outta lil’ Mikey, our mouths connect, her tongue stabs ruthlessly at my own before I clamp down on hers sucking and biting at it, putting all of my thoughts and energy into that one kiss and not the fact that I’m seconds away from my release.

Line wraps her legs around my waist and I continue to massage her derriere with my palms, her animalistic movements have now slowed down considerably because of the position I’ve placed us in. Instead of thrusting I use my hands to move her back and forth over my engorged shaft rocking us closer to our release.

“Oooooooo Michaeeeeeel,” her Danish accent cries out when her clit rubs against my cock each time I slightly withdraw.
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and then collapse on top of her like any forty-six year old man would.
I KNOW thats right! :hoplol:

*wipes sweat off brow*

MAN, that was WELLLLL DOONNNNEEEEEE. I'm itchin to go now and call up MY DTD! JUST DAYUM!

Oh, and for probably the ONLY non sexually related/innocent comment in here....I love your references to movies in here. Especially MIB. Orion was such an adorable kitty :wub:

NOW ONWARD TO CHAPTER 6!!! -stretches arm in front of me with sword in hand like King Authur- :crazylol:

lily0310th March 2011 09:37 PM
I shouldn't have read this at a library. I think I let out a couple of sounds because one or two people looked my way... they must think I'm crazy. LMAO My goddd, Nicki! Thanks to you, I am horny as f*ck. IN A LIBRARY OF ALL PLACES. :heha:

Anyways, I've always loved this era. Plus I always thought he needed a good lay just to relieve all of that frustration and boy did he get some good sexing. Line, I am jealous of you girl! But you worked him good.

And LMAO at him and his "winking". We all know this cutie can't wink worth sh*t. Bwahaha I love it.

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“Aaaaaaahhhhhhhhh Oooooooo Yessssssss deeeeeeeeeper,” f.uck me if I go any deeper I’ll be touching her tonsils.
:toofunny:

Amazing job Nicki! Absolutely amazing!

kajexa0310th March 2011 10:13 PM
Hi Nicki! :wave:

Sorry for being 'tardy for the party' :laughehe:, but my hands were full between work and my Granny's birthday yesterday. Suffice it to say that I JUST read and :uhm:...

OMG!!!! :eek3:

... it was a righteous piece of sexsational goodness! :mmm: Since I'm at work; however, I can only comment on the 'nice' parts. The 'naughty' parts I will save for :uhm: later. :blush2: :wink:


I love Mike & Liz's relationship! :wub: I could 'so' hear the mischief in her voice when she said:

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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 867795)

“Don’t get fresh with me boy – you’re not too old to be put over my knee for a good old fashioned spanking—“ 

:toofunny: I always have loved their relationship and I always will. :wub2: Now I know MJ was not much for looking at himself in the mirror, but him checking himself out while mentally checking off his checklist was HAAAWWWWWTTTTT!!! :heat:

Nice suit? – check!

Starched white shirt? – check!

Black silk tie done up properly by my good friend Elizabeth? – check!

Makeup applied concealing the large bags underneath my eyes? – check!

Hair washed thoroughly, straightened and looking good? – check!

Mental images of a very dapper MJ in a three piece??? :thud: ... Recovery mode :rescue: and back to the story... He was entirely too brazen for eyeballing her from head to toe at first meeting, but I enjoyed every minute of it. I'm not sure if she managed not to feel the heat everywhere his eyes landed, but I d.amn sho' did! :fine:

Nicki- you know how I love my funnies and all of the little miscues and misfires between them were HILARIOUS! :heha: Everything from: adjusting her dress for Mr. Roving Eye, him cutting her off mid-sentence, incorrectly guessing her home country/country of origin, asking her to dance when she couldn't/doesn't, her playing hard to get: 

Her icy exterior at first was an aphrodisiac, now it’s beginning to be a pain in the ass.

:tlaugh: ... to...

“You wanna see my tiger?” 

Now her reaction to this question has me scratching my head 'cause I honestly have no idea why the chick would need to play coy with Mr. Jackson fine as he was in the Trial Era! Instead of acting like a 16 year old virgin, her answer SHOULD have been:

"Sure! But only if you'll let me make him"...

SPOILER: 


:slem: ... :dontknow:, but at any rate- they were back to the blunders with this:

“Here take my jacket” .

“Thank you Michael… I- uh are you going to be okay, it’s pretty cold tonight.” 

“Nah I’m fine girl, you look like you need it more than m—“ ...

ROTFLMAO!!! Open mouth and insert foot! :toofunny: But all this awkwardness makes for some pretty steamy hot stuff in the near future! :slem: Okay... so... they got all cute once they were a little 'imbibed' and started talking about movies and the stars. They had a little race- yada...yada...yada :cute: -then back to those dang tigers again :lol3:

“I really enjoyed seeing your tigers Michael” .

“Well my tigers told me to tell you that they enjoyed seeing you also tonight Line… 

“They did huh… wow you could make yourself some money with those talking tigers..” 

“Well let’s just say I can tell when my tigers are digging someone… they never normally lick strangers hands unless they like them off course… Ya know… Thriller and Sabu are like pussycats really… Now their master on the other hand… well he’s a different story…” 

I feel the page turning ... the script flipping - literally (later on)! :slem: :heha:


“Lead the way…” 

I was right. :smug:

Nicki dear! This is as far as I dare go while on the job because honestly ... the rest of the chapter made me wanna:



... without the "S"!!! :bleh: Awesome fantasy Line! Awesome writing Nicki!

Have a f.ucktacular day~ :grin:

MJThrillMe11th March 2011 12:11 AM
Good Lord, Nicki, you've got some real writing skills. This story was perfect ... PERFECT. :bow: Funny, hot, amazing writing ... Just WOW!!! I checked and I saw you're writing a fan fic (I'm so sorry I was so dumb that I didn't realize you're the author :dummy:). I'll start reading Whatever YOU Got, I Want asap because you've got real talent there.

You made this chapter of FD seem so real that I ... GAHHHHHHHHHHH ... Let's just say I'm posting this comment from the emergency room. :rescue:

That "tiger" line? OMFG, so precious. Oh Mikey, how I'd love to feed that tiger of yours. :slem: If I were Line, I wouldn't even give him the time to take me to the zoo cuz the real big cat is right there in his pants. :heat: Oh my, and how I'd love to tame it ... :mmm: :blush2: "The Taming Of The Shrew" would have a totally different meaning. :sofahide:

Line is so lucky. SO, SO lucky. He did all that to her and she's still breathing? :blink: By all the fingering he does in these stories, I can tell all of you, ladies, have an obsession when it comes to his hands and I'm guilty of that myself. :blush2: I swear, when he's running that finger down the fedora while performing Billie Jean, all I wanna do is lick it until it drops. :drool:

Random thought: I love how everyone's referring to his ... uhmmm ... thing as Mike Jr. I nearly had a heart attack today at work when one of the kids whose name is Mike said he calls himself Mike Jr. because his dad's name is also Mike. I choked on my food as the first thing that came on my mind was ... well, you know ... :slem: Me and my dirty mind. :blush2:

Awesome chapter, Nicki. There are not enough words to express how f.ucking horny I am right now. Oh, Michael, where the hell are you when I need you? :highspeed:


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